Criticizing: Chapter 2

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**Taylors POV**

I was putting on my best clothes and curling my hair. Getting ready to go meet Jacob is a lot of work! (Not really you just put on clothes) After I had finished, I went outside and got in my car.Heart Beating. (Oh I thought you fucking died wowza)
"Be careful and have a great time!" My mom called out to me.
"I will mom! Love you, bye!"

**1 Hour later**

I arrived to where Jacob would be performing. I walked in and saw huge crowds of girls screaming and freaking out. I looked up and saw Jacob singing "Perfect" (it's "You're perfect" you fake fan) I sang along as did other fans did. (As did other fans did) After he sang, everyone got in a line to meet Jacob and get his autograph. (Ain't nobody got time for that) I anxiously waited in line.

Finally, I was next. After the girl in front of me screamed out of excitement, (chill) I walked up to him. I saw him pick his head up and look at me.

**Jacobs POV**

After I signed a fan's picture, another girl was next. She was so beautiful. (you see like 37297482 girls a day wtf are you talking about) Her eyes were perfect (k) and she looked so amazing, I had to get to know her. ("Oh hey look a random fan that I find attractive even though that's wrong of me to only care about looks is holding up a line of 1083927391 fans let's get to know dis bitch") She looked at me and said,"U-um hi, I-I-I'm Taylor." (chill) She is so beautiful. (thats gr8 m8) I gave her my autograph but when she was about to leave, I stopped her. (Jacob softly pulled her back, admiring her tone skin and petite figure. Her nervous filled eyes dazzled around. She stood in front of him, gripping the autographed picture.

"Yes, Jacob?"

He leaned in. Despite the hundreds of fans around him. His smooth voice whispered into her ear.

"F is for friends who do stuff together-")

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