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Hey my name is Michelle Smith I am a detective for the NYPD and my partners are Steve Spencer,Logan Paxton,and Dustin Lewis. My mom was murdered 2 years ago, she was a retired marine soldier. I wanted to get revenge so became a detective in the city she was killed.

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Year 2014

"Hey Michelle?" asked Shanaenae

"What do you want mom?" Michelle blurted.

"DON'T YOU TALK TO YOUR MOTHER LIKE THAT!" Screamed Shanaenae.

"Yes mother," Michelle stated.

"We are moving to Scarsdale Ny!" Screamed Shanaenae.

"But mom I like it here in the quiet city of toronto," Michelle wined.

"I don't care pack your suitcase!" Shanaenae shouted

I started packing my light grey suitcase. I packed my new blue aeropostale shirt. My mom came in my room with her bright orange hair dye dripping from her hair. The floor was now orange.

"I was just checking if my little princess was packing her bag," Shanaenae calmly stated.

"Thanks mom I love you," Michelle said in an irritated manner.

"I love you too honey pumpkin," Shanaenae quietly whispered in her ear.       

We were on our way to NY but we hit some turbulence. We got to The Big Apple. My mom and I went out for a nice dinner at Daniel, a french restaurant it has a 4 12 stars. After dinner we went home through a dark abandoned alley with graffiti all over the walls. A man behind a trashcan jumped out and fired 3 shots but then I heard another shot , I got up with blood gushing out of my bullet hole I tackled the man,took his gun and fired 6 shots 1.......2.......3.......4........5........6, as I fired the last shot I saw my mom slowly dying by bleeding out. The man dropped to the ground he said it was not over. I pulled I trigger one more time and said yes it is. 

"MOM!" Michelle screamed as tears rolling down my face.

"Michelle you have grown into a strong individual, I have lived my life. I was In Vietnam and I raised a beautiful daughter,go make me prouder than I already am,I love you Michelle!"Shanaenae said as her voice was trembling, with tears going down the side of her face.

"MOM DON'T LEAVE I NEED YOU!" Michelle Cried.

2 years later: My mom has been dead for two years now, I know i killed the guy that shot her initially but there was the guy who delivered the bullet that killed her and I am after him. I now work for the NYPD I am the best in the business. With help from my partners are Steve Spencer,Logan Paxton,and Dustin Lewi. We are getting ready to go the abandoned house.

We got to the house and we found a hobo. We took the hobo with a rainbow plant on his shirt in for questioning. When we took him in he said know you I killed your mom. I threw him on the ground and told him what he knows and he described the scene perfectly and his fingerprints matched the ones on the M89SR he was took in and was given the death penalty and now I can finally sleep at night      

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