Webkinzluver5 Reads:Starkit's Prophecy

Chapter Ate the Serimmony 1

(So the chapter ate the ceremony?Also,THERE'S NO CHAPTER SEVEN!)

  STOP REVOFIGN BAD! but than u JASZpAW (Wasn't her name jazzy-kan or something?) for tehh godo revewis uve ben levving (I can literally not imagine anyone in their right mind reviewing this well)

StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?"

"nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become WARRIOR!' (SHE WAS LITERALLY AN APPRENTICE FOR LIKE 2 DAYS!!)

"MOGOSH REALLY creamed StarPaw. (Starpaw is now cream)

YEAH SAID firestar "Youv been a war for onll 3.14 dayss (Yes,Firestar,she's been an apprentice,or a war apparently,for pi days meaning she's been an apprentice for at least 3.1415926535897 days,give or take a few)  butt (STARPAW IS A BUTT) u are the best apent ice in the cAlan. Ur perfect. We ndd you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. (Because in every fanfiction SC is evil) And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the meddle of a warr. " (Even Riverclan,who's on like,the complete OTHER side of the lake?)

"omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed! (You're in the dang Clan!!You'd think someone would tell you at some point!)

"Ya DustPelt did (Is Sandstorm saying that Duspelt died?) while U were away in your walk Rivrclan attacked us." (They're on the other side of the freaking lake!!And why is no one hurt?!) Said SandTrom. (Sandstorm is Tron) She locked sortaf sad she New FireStart lovved Stargleam. (Upgrade)But it wass ok she newt wht wus best. (IT'S NOT FOR THE BEST!!FIGHT FOR YOU HUSBAND SANDSTORM!!DON'T LET YOUR OWN GREAT GRANDAUGHTER TAKE HIM AWAY FROM YOU!)

"OMGoht" sid StarPaw. "Quickk mack me a warrror!" (Alright then)

"Oak" (Oakheart is back) said Firestar. He wlaked up to StarPaw. "aLL Cats Gather Round Who Are Older To Cach There One Prey!" (What was that?)

"Tday we are making a new Warrior."

The calnn GASPED! (Why though?)

"SarkPaw! (The Sark is alive!) StarPaw!: shouted the clan. (How do they know it's Starpaw?) They all new infancy (So all know what it was like to a kitten?) it was she whom was beng mad a warrior.(Why don't the other apprentices get to be made warriors?Are they suddenly unimportant?Does Jazzpaw suddenly not matter?)

Starpaw was so exited! She'd never bin so hap inner life!

"StarPaw....." said FirePaw. (Downgrade) He was simile (he's a simile) like shed never sent him simle behfore. "Are you ready to become a Warrior in the Name of Starcaln?:" (SAY NO!)

"Yes!" she shock3d.(Dang it!)

"oak." Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be none as StarPaw (PFFFTT) for your pel which sings like the starss and ur conectin 2 StarClann. (There was never ANY mention of her having a connection to StarClan!!) We onner you'r bravvery and" " kindness."

"SarkPaw! (THE SARK OF THE SLOUGH) StarPaw!: shouted the clan. They (They what?)

StarGleam (Dang it.She actually got her warrior name) girned. She wass a Warrior! At least!" (Ungrateful!What do you mean by at least?)

"FireScar," (Downgrade+namegrade) she said, cuming over 2 him. "I wanna tell u somesing." They (who's they?) locked sirously at him.

"yeah wat is it?" he sad, hop shinning in his eayres.

Dos he knew? StarGlema think.

"Firestar...." She brethed. She cullednt she was actually dong this after so lung.

"I....."

WINDCLAN ATTAK! Shioted a voise from obove the Camp.

It was....

HOLYLEAF! (The leaf that is holy has arrived!Also,HOLLYLEAF IS IN FREAKING TC!WHY WOULD SHE YELL WINDCLAN ATTACK?!WINDCLAN ISN'T EVEN HERE!!)

I workd reall' herd on dis chapter n tired 2 spell good so plzz review NICE! (You hardly looked like you were trying to spell well!No one would think you worked hard on this chapter!I will not review nice!)