(Prepare to have your brains melted guys)
ok so like i said this iks my first story be nice plz (I'm not very nice sorry c:)
btw its set afte rsunset so (So you set this story down after a sunset?Good to know)
ThunderClan (Fairly good spelling so far.I know I'll end up being wrong in the future,though)
Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt
Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Medicine Cat: JayFeather-gray tom (Wait...did we fast forward in time to about book 4 or 5 of POT?)
Warriors:
Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes
Apprentice, Foxpaw
Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom (Eye colors disappear after Duspelt)
Sandstorm - pale ginger she-ca (What's a ca?)
Cloudtail - long-haired white tom
Apprentice DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace (Wait...what?)
Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom
Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes
Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom
Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches
Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes
Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes
Apprentice, Icepaw
Birchfall - light brown tabby tom
Graystripe - long-haired gray tom
Berrynose - cream-colored tom
Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat
Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom
Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat
Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat
Honeyfern- light brown tabby she-cat
Lionblaze - golden tabby tom (WHAT)
Hollyleaf - black she-cat (THIS IS JUST AFTER SUNSET!!WHERE DID THEY COME FROM?!)
FoxHeart-reddish tabby tom
IceFire-white she cat (Not the correct name,but it's pretty nice)
ToadRibbit-black—and-white tom (Just wow)
RoseFlame-dark cream she cat (Also not the correct name,but it's still now)
BriarStorm-dark brown she cat (Wait...did BriarLIGHT,BumbleSTRIPE,and BlossomFALL exist at this time?)
BumbleFlower-very pale gray tom with black stipes (Such a manly name)
BlossomWind-pale brown she cat iwth a dark stripe along her spine
Apprentices:
Fox DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace (I-I don't even know)
FlamePaw-firecolored she cat with one grnee eye one blue eye (Eye colors come back hooray)
LakePaw-bright blue gray she cat with blue eyes
The last 2 r starKits siters (They're Starkit's babysitters?)
JazzPaw-red she cat with blue eyes and a black tail (Cats aren't smart enough to know what jazz is)
Queens:
Ferncloud - pale gray (with darker flecks) she-cat with green eyes mother of Dustpelts kits
Dawnsparkle-bright tortishell she cat with garguntan blue eye's mother of Jayfeathers' ktis, formaly of Shadowclan (OK.Just no.Several things wrong with this.Cats don't know what the heck sparkle is,Jayfeather is breaking the warrior and medicine code *I think*,gargantuan is spelled wrong,Starkit's mother has REALLY big eyes,and formerly of ShadowClan?Just...I don't even know.)
Kits:
StarKit-graysh-blue-and purple she cat with molting orange eyes and a white star on her forhaed (What?!Grayish-blue is a fur color,but not purple!Also,WHYYYYYY)
Elders:
Longtail - pale tabby tom with dark black stripes, retired early due to failing sight (Eye colors disappear again)
Mousefur - small dusky brown she-cat
Weaslepelt-big red tabby he cat with bight yellow eyes (hes Rowanclaw's dad, he came to Thunderclan when Dawn- did0 (...What?Also eye colors come back)
LeafPool-brown tabby she cat (What?!Leafpoo's not old!)
ShadowClan
Leader: Blackstar - large white tom with huge jet-black paws (Eye colors disappear I'm getting sick of this already)
Deputy: Russetfur - dark ginger she-cat
Medicine Cat: Littlecloud - very small tabby tom
Apprentice, Flamepaw (ginger tom)
Warriors:
Oakfur - small brown tom
Apprentice, Tigerpaw (dark brown tabby tom)
Rowanclaw - ginger tom
Smokefoot - black tom
Apprentice, Owlpaw (light brown tabby tom)
Ivytail - black, white and tortoiseshell she-cat
Apprentice, Dawnpaw (cream-furred she-cat)
Toadfoot - dark brown tom
Crowfrost - black-and-white tom
Apprentice, Olivepaw (tortoiseshell she-cat)
Kinkfur - tabby she-cat, with long fur that sticks out at all angles
Ratscar - brown tom with long scar across his back
Apprentice, Shrewpaw (gray she-cat with black feet)
Snaketail - dark brown tabby tom with striped tail
Apprentice, Scorchpaw (dark gray tom)
Whitewater - white she-cat with long fur, blind in one eye
Apprentice, Redpaw (mottled brown and ginger tom)
Tawnypelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes (Eye colors back)
Flamewind- flame color tabby tom with green eye's
Tigerclaw-huge dark brown tabby tom with long claw's and amber eys
DawnFeather-cream tabby she cat (shes a different cant [Can't?] then the one in tC ok?) [That doesn't mean I won't confuse her with Dawnsparkle.Actually,that's impossible.Dawnsparkle's name sticks out like a sore thumb.Eye colors disappear again]
OlivePaw-bright brown she cat
Queens:
Snowbird - pure white she-cat
Elders:
Cedarheart - dark gray tom
Tallpoppy - long-legged light brown she-cat
WindClan
Leader: Onestar - brown tabby tom
Deputy: Ashfoot - gray she-cat
Medicine Cat: Barkface - short-tailed brown tom
Apprentice, Kestrelpaw (mottled gray tom)
Warriors:
Tornear - tabby tom
Crowfeather - dark gray tom
Owlwhisker - light brown tabby tom
Whitetail - small white she-cat
Nightcloud - black she-cat
Gorsetail - very pale gray-and-white cat with blue eyes (Came back)
Weaselfur - ginger tom with white paws (Disappear)
Harespring - brown-and-white tom
Leaftail - dark tabby tom, amber eyes (Came back)
Apprentice, Thistlepaw (long-haired white tom)
Dewspots - spotted gray she-cat (Disappear)
Apprentice, Sedgepaw (light brown tabby she-cat)
Willowclaw - gray she-cat
Apprentice, Swallowpaw (dark gray she-cat)
Antpelt - brown tom with one black ear
Emberfoot - gray tom with two dark paws
Apprentice, Sunpaw (tortoiseshell she-cat with large white mark on her forehead)
Heathertail - light brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes (Come back)
Breezepelt - black tom with amber eyes
Elders:
Morningflower - very old tortoiseshell queen (Disappear.You know what I'm not doing eye colors anymore.You get the point;of course she'd be in the elders den is she's old)
Webfoot - dark gray tabby tom
RiverClan
Leader: Leopardstar - unusually spotted golden tabby she-cat
Deputy: Mistyfoot - gray she-cat with blue eyes
Medicine Cat: Mothwing - dappled golden she-cat
Apprentice, Willowshine (gray tabby she-cat)
Warriors:
Blackclaw - smoky-black tom
Voletooth - small brown tabby tom
Apprentice, Minnowpaw (dark gray she-cat)
Reedwhisker - black tom
Mosspelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentice, Pebblepaw (mottled gray tom)
Beechfur - light brown tom
Rippletail - dark gray tabby tom
Apprentice, Mallowpaw (light brown tabby tom)
Graymist - pale gray tabby
Dawnflower - pale gray she-cat
Dapplenose - mottled gray she-cat
Pouncetail - ginger-and-white tom
Mintfur - light gray tabby tom
Apprentice, Nettlepaw (dark brown tabby tom)
Otterheart - dark brown she-cat
Apprentice, Sneezepaw (gray-and-white tom)
Pinefur - very short-haired tabby she-cat
Apprentice, Robinpaw (tortoiseshell-and-white tom)
Rainstorm - mottled gray-blue tom
Duskfur - brown tabby she-cat
Apprentice, Copperpaw (dark ginger she-cat)
Queens:
Icewing - white cat with green eyes, mother of Beetlekit, Pricklekit, Petalkit, and Grasskit
Elders:
Heavystep - thickset tabby tom (Playin' a Heavystep card)
Swallowtail - dark tabby she-cat
Stonestream - gray tomAlright,so the overall grammar in this actually wasn't too terrible.Just a few typos here in there (apart from the author note in the beginning),so this technically wasn't as bad as I thought it would be.OK.I can live with this.
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Webkinzluver5 Reads:Starkit's Prophecy
FanficLINEART BY silver-star-leader ON DEVIANTART. SOURCE OF STORY:http://starkitsprophecy.webstarts.com/the_story.html ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I'm gonna be honest.I'm not looking forward t...