More bad grammar.It's painful to read this every day after seeing correct grammar all day.
"Oh no Broakcnstar!" yelled StarGleam (I'm not even doing upgrades downgrades and namegrades anymore.You pretty much get it by now.) mad;y I can;t be talkin to brokenStar!" And sheran away leaving AshFurt (Ashfart) behin her. She run and ranned and runend (This again...) and then se was at StarClan!"
"Yay Im not at the dark Fort anymro1! (The Fort of Darkness) she thought happly and then she wasked across the broard (She was washing herself across the border) and then she was in Starclan!1
"Welcmon to Starcaln said YellowFangn (Wasn't she already here a couple of times?) she was stnding ther with LefPool, BrambleClan, SpottedLeaf and BakSrae.(Baksrae?Who was this supposed to be?And when did Leafpool and Brambleclaw die?Also,BrambleClan?Where did they come from?)
"Blakstar (mystery solved) yoyre not in the Dark FGort !" (Of course he's not in the Dark Fort.) Gleamstar yelled hellpy, she didnt want him to be their she lovd him after all. (Did you suddenly forget about Hawkfrost,who you wanted to get married with?)
"Of course not" BlackStar relipe. "wy would i be their I mean I luv tou after tll2!" (After tll2?)
"well thats tru" reoidned Gleamstar. "but I can't be in StarCan! (The can full of stars) Oalready came here once I cant do it agan!" (You're right.You can't.StarClan have probably seen what horrible things you've done lately.)
"well it looks like you haf. said BlueStar and she said "but we cant send you back to the calns again, this time it locks like we'll have to REINCART YOU." (Yes,we'll put her in a cart again)
"Omh Reincartion!" yelled StarGam "you mean like what haopned to CinderPaw?" (How does she know CinderPELT was reincarnated?)
"Yah" said CinderPelt comin yp to her "thast what happened t me I was reicnanrt." She Said.
"But it might be awhile" said SpottedPool "after all we have to figre out Ow were going do that firtsl} "go do somethinm elese" (Just why)
"okay" siad GleamStar and she luf. She heard her namer being called and she turnd around and saw HawkForst standing over her body.
"StarPaw noooooooooooooooooooooo!1111!11111!1!11!111!" je yowle. "Starcaln how ould you od this to me!" "We were about to get marti. (You were about to get Marty the zebra as a pet?)
"Im sorry Hawk Frost" said StarGleam "I'll be back soon I think"!
"Wat whose there?" HawkFrost looked around but hed idnt sieantyhing.
"Its me GleamStar" said GleamStra looking at him. (What the...?)
"I cant see yo" he said and he buped into a tree. Then he fele down. (I'm so confused...)
"bye HawkForst!" said StarGleam and she left cius she didn' want to see what would haben when her belocd HawkyForest wock up so she luf. (Huh..?)
"hi their StarGlema" said a voice and GlemaGleam (Gleamgleam.Even better.)looked around. "Whose there!1!11!" she eked and it was... Falled leaf!1!111111!1!11111 (Falled Leaf.That's totally his name.)I got through this chapter quicker than I thought.
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