(Time for more terrible grammar)
StarGleam shock her head waling up from the derm. FireStar was looking at her and his gren eys where sorrid. "GlaeStar (Galestar) you were takling in yuour slept are you ok?" he asked. JayFeather looked upsid to.
"Yeah yeah Im fin" StarGleam reponded gettin up. "I just had a badd dream thass all." "It's nothen."
"If your sur." Said FireStrar and they left the MonoPool (Is this the Moonpool or the Moonstone?) and headed back too the Thundercaln camp.
"GleamStar your back!" (How the heck do they know that's her leader name?!) they said happy, crowding all over her. LakePaw and RedPaw looked sad thou, becas GleamStarg has sad they cant be in luv. But GleamSar ingored them. But she new she had too do somefing more impotent.
"LinoBlaz" she said locking for her deputy. "I nedd you to tack a patrole tothe Sadowclan boulder," "I need you ro tell BlackStar im leder know." (You can tell him at the Gathering since he didn't show up!) she said and she turnd and walked over the keader's den evwn though everone was trying to ask her questns about the serimy. "Guysz let me to to bed" (No!You should be assigning patrols,making new warriors *cough*YOURSISTERSREDPAWANDJAZZPAW*cough*,leading your Clan!God you'll make a terrible leader!) she said shoeing them awy. /"Let me have a niche to myself!"
They all walked away groabling. "She nevwr let's us have any fun" said BeryNoise. "Thats not kawaii at all." (Just why with the kawaii)
GleamStar didnlt care sge was waiting for FireStar. (I thought he was called Fireheart now..) Then FireHert came into her den. "I'm levving" he said and he lef. (NO!!DON'T LET STARSTAR RULE OVER THIS CLAN!!) StarGleam (downgrade already) followed him uyelling "WAIT!1!11 Where are you gong?"
"Well I cant be ledder so I'm just goint to leaf for a while. Maybe Ill be a rogue, or maybe I'll go join skyCaln. Who knows?" (Just...why) Then he luf. StarGamet was sad b/c that was her mentor and one of the cats she luvved leaving but it was ka since thass what he wanted to due. (That is far from OK!!)
"Its oka StarStar" (Someone is calling her by her ACTUAL name!Yes! :D) said HawkFrot appearating out of nonwhere. "I mean I love you so its all god."
"I no" said StarGlea prring she wrapped her tail around HawkFrosts face she dint care that he was a rogue, she loved him. And now they could be togethier!/
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