Webkinzluver5 Reads:Starkit's Prophecy

Chapter Eitheen The Deat 11 11 1

You've probably noticed I've been yelling a lot.The reason for this is because I'm SO fed up with this story AND Gleamstar at this point. T_T

StarKit (Triple downgrade!) weak (and she's weak! :D) up shed been asleep. Their was ayoll (yodel) from the capm! She run otides her den she junped of the HighRidge. (High ridge?) "I gott to kill ou: somone sadi. It WA.S..... TIGEERSTAR! (NUuuuu)

"Ttlu." (What does ttlu stand for?) Said HollyLefa meanly from his ides. GLEAM STAR welled "GET OUT OF THE CRAMP EVERYONE"(Everyone out of camp before you get a cramp!) she coldu hander it heself. (No you can't.Then again you're a Mary Sue)

"No" said BarkFall (TC IS USING THE WAY OF THE DOGS) "we elov you somuch StarGleam we could'nt leafe u" NAD THE CATS FOUT! (I read fout as fart)

HolyKeaf turned into... a.... FUX! (She's a FAX?!NOOO) GlameStar (Blamestar.We will blame you for our problems) surpised. She jopped! (Jopped?) But it was too latte!1 The foz was an inc form her face when LinoBlaze apparetd! (Dinoblaze!)She clawed him They're was bold. (One hit kill ._.) "noooooo" said GleamStart. She was greif. (She turned into grief!) Teras falled down her sparkling grey checks. (I thought her fur was greyish-blue and purple!Also,how do cash checks sparkle?) The shoned like the sun on her spakling checks. (She has checks) Her reinbow eyes where glowed lick skys after rani.. It was beutifly thohth HawkForts. (Where's Hawk Forts?)

"its oyak StarGleam." said LionBealz. "I doe for you. it makes me gay whit hapyness." (WHAT.)

"LIONBLAZE ARE YOU A..... HOMOSEZZUAL?/?/?/?2" said StG;eamStar.(How do these cats know what homosexual means?!And also,THE 10 CONDIMENTS NEVER SAID ANYTHING ABOUT BEING HOMO)  gasp. was here clan bevoming quare. (...Quare?) Bet b4 he colde awnser he ded! (Lionblaze up and died.Wow.Not so invincible after all :P)

"NOOP" said GleamStar, "HE WAS MY BORTHERS FATHER (You don't have a brother!) I WILL AVENGE THOU." (WE WILL AVENGE THOU!!) She said. She lapped at HolltLeaf! HollyFale lagged (The program Hollyleaf.warriorcode.ex is lagging.Please close your game.) and run "its to lare" she meowled "lock behind u" (GRAB A LOCK AND LOCK IT BEHIND YOUR BACK!)

StarGleam looked. TiggClaw (Downgrade) was scratching DAWNSPAEKLE (Brought back into the story only to be attacked) she run up the he cat clawd him he ran aya. "get pout of here Hacky-kin" (Jazzy-kun,get out of here! D:<) she sad its too danheros" (Dan Heroes:Revolution) "iie" 9meanes no) said Hawkyfrost.(I just...that grammar before was beyond terrible)  "I lobe you my daer I wan't live you." (???)

But the cats weer goin. Tiggerstar lagged (The program Tigerstar.shadowclan.ext is lagging.Please close your game.) sadly. "you mayt have defted ous this time," his said "but nest time well be STORNGER." (You could say that literally 1 MILLION TIMES and it would NEVER be true) Then he left. Then HolyLeag left. Then thuneer clan was saf!

"since LionBleaze deid said Gleamstar I nedda new depudy. JazzPaw cum hear. JazzPaw came. "JazzPaw I want make you in warrior. So you can bw my depduey." (WHAT?!SHE DOESN'T EVEN HAVE AN APPRENTICE YET!!!!WHY DOES NOBODY CARE ABOUT THE WARRIOR CODE ANYMORE!!) JaszPaw smieled! She was so happ! "JazzPaw form now n youll be JazzSong. Also ur my depdy. Anyone have a problem with that?: (I DO!!I HAVE A BIG PROBLEM WITH THAT!!IN FACT I HAVE A LIST OF PROBLEMS RIGHT HERE!! :waves around list of complaints:)  she was mean bcase she was sad~ no the cats said obdenintley. They new he was sad. (Gleamstar is a guy?) They ripsected it,, linblaze was her after all. besider mots of the cats thouhth StarG;eam (Wasn't her name Gleamstar?) was kawai when she was mad her eyes robbled. (Just why) She and hawkFrost slept NOT LIKE THAT THERE NT MAKES (Then why would they say they loved each other?) THEY WOULD DO THAT YET DONT REMEMBER THE CMONDANTS? (I do,but nobody seems to care about #11 which should really be #13)

Im sorr it tock so logn, but I think I did real god on hese chathers. (I don't.They're terrible as usual) I was tiered the last one was log