I SAID NO FLAMES! YOUR JUST JELOS YOUR GOING 2 HEL LJESS IS OYUR SAVER (Just.I don't even care anymore)
"Ohno its HolyLeaf!" (The leaf that is holy is evil?!*le gasps*) yelled FireStra he ranned away. (Where are you running to,you coward?!) SandStrom wnet aftre him. (I'll assume that they are mates again)
StarGlaem locked up. (Is she LOOKING up or did she freeze up?I honestly don't know) HolyLeaf was stnding their and their was anodder chat with hr. (She on Skype now or what?)
"OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" (TIGGER IS SECRETLY EVIL!!NUUUUR) she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!"
"we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he ran at HollyLeaf. (She's your freaking sister,for crying out loud!) StarGlema washed (Why are you taking a bath at a moment like this?!?!) as HolyLefa locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot. (ONE HIT KILL WHAT HOLLYLEAF IS A MARY SUE!And also...WHY WOULD SHE KILL HER OWN BROTHER THAT'S AGAINST THE DANG WARRIOR CODE!!)
"YOU KILDED MY FTHER! she yelled and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw (down+namegrade) gut out of the way and StarPaw attaked TiggerSar.(Where did he come from?)
"U killed TigerStra!" (WHERE DID IT SAY THAT THIS MARY SUE KILLED HIM YOU IDIOT?!) uelled FiresStar he locked happy. "You are speshil!" (No she's not.She's just OP and a Mary Sue)
StarGleam was sooo happy, she didng notse as HollyLea grabbed Firestar and took him way. (I thought this coward ran away earlier!)
"OH NO" yelled StarKit.(Downgrade) "WE HAVE TO SAVE HIM!
a cilf hunger1!111! see im a god riter (You are literally the worst writer I have ever seen write.Seriously,did you get bannded from fanfiction.net because of your BEYOND terrible grammar?) i no what thta id thx f4r the good revweiws JzzPaw && everon else WHOSE NIT A FALMER (I can't imagine anybody not being a flamer)
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