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'Secret love, my Mate' is a discontinued werewolf/romance story by TheWriterGirlHasFun, that switches back and forth from two perspectives, Elija, the pack Alpha's brother, and Anetta, a mysterious rogue girl found on the edge of the pack borders.
Only three chapters currently exist, so I couldn't really get a feel for the plot, but this story had a solid enough beginning.
Positives: The characters were developed enough considering the length, and I enjoyed my time reading what she had up of the story. This story is different from a lot of the other werewolf books I've read, and on the cliche meter, I'd say it was golden. Generally, her word choice was good and I got a good feel what was going on.
Negatives: Sometimes the story felt a little rushed, and I occasionally found myself having to re-read a sentence or two. If you ever feel like starting a story up again, I'd recommend outlining it first so you don't have to discontinue it.
Grammar/Punctuation: I couldn't find too many errors, but this story could use polishing (as could any story). Sometimes the metaphors or similes used were a bit awkward, but generally, there wasn't much of a problem here.
Characters: The characters were interesting and very different than a lot of the other cliche books on wattpad, Kudos!
Dialogue: Typically made sense, although sometimes a little forced.
Authors voice: Relatively clear and consistent throughout the story.
