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'It Never Happened' is an ongoing romance novel by lil_dove, that is consistently in the P.O.V of female protagonist and high school student, Sky as she struggles to deal with the death of her father and her new stepdad.
Positives: The concept of this story is not cliche and supplies a refreshing read over other books on Wattpad.
Negatives: Grammar, punctuation, and dialogue need a lot of improvement.
Grammar/Punctuation: There was a lack of any punctuation which made the writing feel unnatural and long and provided the reader with a confusing look on the characters/plot.
Characters: Mediocre character development, although it was challenging to get a good grip on them because the punctuation (or lack thereof) made it quite confusing to understand what was going on.
Dialogue: fascinating conversations when I could understand what was going on, but sometimes made about 0 sense.
Authors voice: The author's voice doesn't clearly shine through on this book.
