Beyond the Stars(peterick fanfiction) Original

Hey Suprise

guess what all you beautiful people. I am actually re-writing this story. Now this update is like the teaser trailer that comes out six months before the actual movie but let me tell you the new and improved version will not only be longer, it is going to have less spelling and grammar mistakes! oh, how fun. It is going to stay pretty true to this original story but it will be overall better and easier to read and follow. It's going to be a feat of imagination and big chunks of it may be changed and the ending may or may not be different depending. I have already written the first four chapters of it but will not be posting until it is completely or almost completely done! I am just letting all you bros know so the word can spread a little. It will be posted as a new story on my account probably within the next month to two months (hoping for short but prepare for the long). I hope all of you guys will give it a chance when it comes out and for a little teaser I will give you guys a few new paragraphs:  

....I sigh and walk up to his side of the car pulling the door open for him and grabbing his arm to pull him out. He really looks like he doesn't want to and would rather live his life in the car. He eyes up the banana in my hand with questioning eyes. I break off a chunk and hand it to him before taking another bite and walking into the house. He follows and I hear him lick the piece of fruit in his hand. I sigh and flick on a light to brighten up the dark house and suddenly he's screaming and a crash sounds and before I can turn around he is already gone.

I panic and rush around trying to locate him. I find him hiding underneath my dining room table clutching his chunk of banana. His eyes are wide and he looks terrified. I figure that's a good enough place for him now I go back to the kitchen and grab another banana taking off the peel fully before walking back to the dining room. I hand the banana to him under the table and he takes it slowly. I walk away hoping the banana will keep him entertained long enough for me to take a shower......

See you bros soon!