You were alone, not knowing what to do. Not many people were in favor of you because Zelda had spread rumors ever since the accident when you both were younger. Just because she was the princess the all believed whatever she said and avoided you, sp...
Okay, so I've been constantly doubting my writing of course. That's just a thing. But anyway, I was wondering if some readers could give me some feedback like: "Should I shorten my chapters?"
"Should I make my sentences shorter?"
"More detail? Less detail?"
"Continue slowly building relationship wit you and Dark or just GO FOR IT."
Etc.
Stuff like that. And if you can't think of feedback or something at least tell me if your enjoying the story so far. I know not much is happening a the moment but it's only the 3rd chapter so it's understandable. Lol. But yeah, if your enjoying it please tell me so. So I know at least one person is. If there aren't any "yeah, I enjoy it." Comments... Well then I'll just wait since it's a new story and not a lot have people have read it yet.
So FEEDBACK PLS 😂
Also there Will be an update ntoday. So chapter 4 will be coming. Thank you guys. Extra pic that I love:
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*Update* New chapter will come out later. I have to sleep. If I'm tired and write it may not end out that great so yeah, it will be finished later. I'll try making both chapter later today. Look forward to them and remember! Feedback.
