hi im aisha/bia001 this is my first story so please be free to act as a critic
CHAPTER 1
The first job was easy; we got in, completely trashed the place and got out without Getting caught .It was fun in a way .But the second one went all wrong.
I didn't know have it happened I mean it was just for fun .Ok it was for the money but I needed it to pay for Beeb's ballet lesson. The socials wouldn't pay it because we wouldn't want to go the next week but Beeb she really wanted to do it. I didn't want her to be upset so I started to hunt for a job so did my crew.
Oh my crew, Jay, Liz, Ronn, Flic, Liam, oh and me Jazz. I've known them for years. We nearly did everything together from playing in the park to annoying our community officer (he really doesn't like us especially Jay because Jay knows how to wind a person up he even got a medal saying it. But his cool coz he can talk out just about anything) and like all times they wanted to help.
But what kind of employer would want to employ stressed 14 year olds. I totally gave up but they didn't and soon we found one together. We shouldn't of have taken the job. But by know we were kind of desperate so it was godsends but know it's obvious.
The dude was dodgy.
I mean he called me Jasmine and not Jazz like everyone else and were did he get my number from only god knows. I remember the day I got those texts at the time they exited me but know I wish I'd ignored them Coz if I had then I wouldn't be worried about Knife or Wheels or their boss but it's to late to wish for that, so What I want to know is why did he choose us ? And who is he to decide our fates?
