Crystal tries to let you know how to write a story

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Sorry. Crystal's the main star for this chapter.


I'm watching uhshe so...here you go, senpai.



*we both sit in the dining room of Cassie's mansion*


Crystal: Woo! Okay, hello, I'm Crystal, blue-haired, 12 years of age, avid Hetalia fan, mystic messenger, hedgehog human...


Anyways....so...


These are ten steps to writing a story mode story.


(explained by Crystal or @Crystalsong11 )



1. No immediate shipping.


Make a plot first. It's not your fault if your story sucks because it doesn't have a plot. Usually, people go straight for shipping.


Dawson: (in the background) *laughs* You don't have to be so harsh on them, I'd just say something like work out a plot before-


Crystal: Shh *pushes my forehead so I fall on the chair backwards* You just watch your uhshe, okay?


Dawson: Okay x) .



2. have a PLOT..PLEASE


*wheezes violently* Have a story placed or in place. Have it have a good beginning, good middle, and great ending.


Have something like where they went in the sea temple, like Jack's adventure with Sammy (Sammie?) and Vos in the sea temple


You know. Before Vos and Sammie..died.

(I wrote this after Season two got announced so...yeah.)


Or have the characters have a seasonal adventure, or their adventures in the different dimensions we didn't get to see.


Something...because if it has no plot...I'm gonna kill you


Dawson...*sighs* Crystal. No.



3. NO SINGING OUT OF THE BLUE


NO ONE SINGS OUT OF NOWHERE

WHY IN ALMOST EVERY BOOK IT'S,

"So-and-so suddenly felt a song coming on"


then they post the ENTIRE SONG-


Dawson: We're gonna get so much hate


Crystal: AND BOOM! *claps multiple times* That's the chapter! *fuming angrily*


Just *breathes then continues* you know, just...think of the character. Could they, is it normal for them to burst into song?


Most people, they don't or they hum, and not the entire song. People tend to sing or hum their favorite part of something, and they don't just, 'feel a song coming on.'


Unless it's a Disney movie.

Then it's ok


4. PLOT PLOT PLOT PLOT PLOTS AND OTPS

ahhHH I CAN'T STRESS THIS ENOUGH

I KNOW I TALKED ABOUT IT ALREADY BUT JEEZ


Cry-


Crystal: PLOT. PLOT PLOT PLOT PLOT PLOT PLEASE HAVE A PLOT




*beep*


Okay, I've clamed down-


*realizes my mistake*

hah! Sorry



*beep*


Okay, I've calmed down, but I think that's it. Just make it so your characters are rounded, your ending is cool and interesting, your overall story is great, and it's not all about shipping.


...please.








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