warrior life

From Kit to Warrior Part 2

                 i just realized that i spelled Fernwhisker without the H so i fixed it in this part... BTW im really lazy so i don't really care about my mistakes like your, you're or their, there, they're. anyway, im gonna let you read now so bye and thx for reading my story! :D

P.S. can someone pm me and tell me how to indent cause im just spacing right now :l

                   Honeykit scampered into the middle of the clearing,"Wow look at all the space here! We could have so much fun playing mouse!"she exclaimed. "yup! your the mouse Sparrowkit! We're gonna catch you!" Cloverkit dropped into the hunter's crouch and started to stalk Sparrowkit , who was snuffling around trying to imitate a mouse sound. Giggling, Honeykit followed Cloverkit into a position opposite from her, with their brother in the middle. Step, by step, they closed in on Sparrowkit who now was trying to act like he didn't notice them. Honeykit glanced at Cloverkit and she nodded, they readied their selves to pounce, and -"Kits! lunch!!" Honeykit was so suprised that she misjudged the jump and just managed to stop herself from falling on her face while her brother and sister wrestled in the clearing, growling. "Kits! I said lunch!" Fernwhisker called again. Cloverkit and Sparrowkit broke apart,"But Momma! we wanna play!" Cloverkit wailed,"Besides," Sparrowkit added,"we're not hungry right?" he asked glancing at Cloverkit. "Yeah!" she agreed," Honeykit, you with us?" Honeykit's stomach rumble loudly. "Well... I'm kinda...okay really, really hungry, so, uh, I think I'll just...go and eat so, uh, bye!" she meowed awkwardly, running off towards her mother.

                   Fernwhisker was by the fresh-kill pile. "Well its good to see you actually came, come and share a mouse with me, its time you had your first taste," Fernwhisker mewed Honeykit squeaked with surprise but recovered herself in time and gave the mouse a wary sniff, "It doesn't smell that bad so i guess ill try it."  she thought. Cautiously, she took a bite, immediately the warm smell and taste flooded her mouth."well? What do you think?" Fernwhisker asked as she looked down at her. Honeykit swallowed her mouthful and answered," it's great!" her mother smiled ." i knew you would like it" At that moment Cloverkit and Sparrowkit bonded over and skidded to a stop next to them, "Mom can we be apprentices yet? i wanna be one now!" Cloverkit mewed. "Sorry little one you're only two moons old! you have to be six moons old to be an apprentice,"Fernwhisker soothed. "Meanwhile," Honeykit piped up, "come try this mouse! its really good." Cloverkit looked at the mouse carefully,"...Okay?..." she leaned in and took a bite, her expresion changing into disbelief. Honeykit watched as she swallowed. "so? what do you think?

                    "Save some for me!" Sparrowkit bounce to them and took a bite of it. "it's so good!" Cloverkit mewed "it is!" Sparrowkit mumbled around his mouthful. "Glad you like it!" Fernwhisker purred. Honeykit swallowed another mouthful,"can we go play now?" she asked. "Sure!" Fernwhisker mewed "but not to hard or you'll get stomach aches!" she called after them but they showed now sign of hearing her."kits." she mewed fondly.

                     Honeykit finally got the pounce right and landed squarely on Sparrowkit's back. "yay! i did it!" Sparrowkit rolled on his back and Honeykit leaped off just in time. "Whew!" she sighed. she noticed Cloverkit hunched about two tail lengths away and bounced over to her ," hey come on! i'll fight you this time!" Honeykit  meowed. Cloverkit heaved herself to her paws, seeming to grimace in pain Honeykit tilted her head," are you okay?" she asked "im...fine." Cloverkit gasped Honeykit shook off the feeling that something was wrong and bounded across to the clearing. When she reached it she turned and saw Cloverkit  slowly trying to run towards them, wincing with each time she moved. when she reached them Honeykit pounced on her not noticing Cloverkit just barley stopped herself from yowling in pain as she fell, Honeykit was confused, even Sparrowkit didn't fall when she attacked.

                    Cloverkit climbed back on her paws slowly before Honeykit struck a blow to her side, claws sheathed, Cloverkit gasped with impact though Honeykit barley touched her. Cloverkit tried to leap on her but ended up stumbling and falling belly exposed. Honeykit thought,"she isn't normally like this,"   but she shook it of and jumped on Cloverkit's stomach and started plummeting her. Cloverkit couldn't take the pain this time, she yowled for Fernwhisker  as Honeykit froze on her. Honeykit quickly jumped off as Fernwhisker ran over to where Cloverkit lay groaning in pain. "What happened?" Fernwhisker asked. "N-nothing! we were play fighting and...and she just, fell!" her mother sighed ,"I warned you not to play too hard after you ate." she looked at  Cloverkit as she moaned again. "Cloudleaf! you're needed!" she called for the Thunderclan medicine cat. A short-furred silver striped white she-cat poked her head out of the brambles that screen her den,"yes?" she asked, then her gaze drifted to Cloverkit who was now curled up in a ball of fur with a groan of pain when she was moved. "Oh" Cloudleaf sighed," bring her into my den."

                       Honeykit watched anxiously as Fernwhisker picked up Cloverkit by the scruff and carried her into the den, leaving Honeykit and Sparrowkit staring at each other. "Guess we better go to sleep," Sparrowkit said quietly,"its almost sundown." Honeykit nodds and they head back to the nursery,"I hope she's okay"  Honeykit thought as she fell asleep in her mossy nest

 The next day...

               Sorry you'll have to wait for next part! >:)  MWAHAHAHAHAHA sorry XP i got alittle carryed away on the story so its not so good...

*sigh*

im running out of ideas for names and also should i focus on one character or do all three with one chapter for each like in a real book when its like one cat in one chapter then it swiches back and forth ?

if you do think so, who do you think should be the main character next chapter? if not the 2nd then who should be the main character for the book?

plz let me know soon and Thx again! XD