Mystery Unknown

THE EXIT- PART 2

      Jasmine's mom has been in the hospital for the pay three weeks receiving treatments for severe burns, cuts, and bruises. Jasmine not seeing her mother and knowing that she is in the hospital makes her feel sad and lonely but she didn't need anyone to comfort her.

      Jasmine comes home from school that Friday, as she remembers the fun her and her mother had every weekend. Jasmine fought back the tears and went to order pizza, feeling lazy to cook. Within five minutes the pizza arrives, she pays the delivery guy and he left.

      Balancing on the couch with a slice of pizza in hand and a can of diet soda in the other as she watches the program been displayed on the TV.

      The phone rings on the kitchen counter. Jasmine jumps out of the couch and runs to the kitchen in order to catch the phone on time before it cuts.

      "Hello?" Jasmine asked not knowing the caller.

      "Hello, is this Jasmine Darwin?" the caller asked as if in a hurry.

      "Yes, I am" she answered praying the caller wasn't from the hospital.

      "You are needed immediately, it's your mother", the caller said waiting for the message to sink in and then cut the phone.

      Jasmine checked the clock above the refrigerator, it was almost ten. She didn't even bother to arrange the place before she left.

      She rides with full speed and get a to the hospital, she was asked to wait. Different thoughts raced through her mind as she wondered why she was asked to be here.

      After what seemed like forever which was actually an hour and thirty minutes the doctor finally comes out with a stethoscope hanged around his neck.

      "Well? What's wrong" she asked impatiently as the doctor just stares at her blankly.

      "We tried our best..." the started as he bows his head. The doctor grew a pair and looked Jasmine in the eye. "We lost her" he finished.

      Jasmine's head blows up into a thousand pieces as she steps back and covers her mouth will her hand."No, no" she mutters under her breath.

      She storms to the doctor hitting his chest repeatedly "You didn't try hard enough, you could have saved her." Jasmine shouted as fresh tears run down her cheeks.

      She runs pass the doctor to her mother's room and kneels down beside her. Her mother's body was already white and cold like a pack of ice.

      Jasmine shakes her mother violently as if she would stand up. "Come on mom, wake up, you can't be dead. You said you never leave. Am waiting for you."

      The doctor enters with some security men, the men drag her out of the room. She struggles to free herself but they were stronger than her.

      A nurse comes in as Jasmine is been dragged out and covers her mother's back as Jasmine was escorted out of the building.

      Looking through the transparent glass door, Jasmine cries wishing none of it was happening, that someone would wake her and say it was all a dream.

      As if things couldn't get any worse it started to rain. Jasmine brought out her phone attempting to call Gabriella.

      She had to do it alone. She shoves the phone back into her pocket as she runs to her bike and mounts it, riding with full speed wanting her worries to pass away but it didn't work.

      Jasmine heads for the bridge, the number of cars on it were few because of the time. Jasmine jumps out allowing the bike yo shift to a particular side of the road.

      She got to the edge of the bridge and looks down, a might ocean stood by. She climbed the edge and looks down again, she turns around to face the road, she brings out her phone and checks the time, it was eleven fifty-eight.

      She put the phone back into her pocket, wore her hood and spread her hands sideways. She counted one hundred and twenty seconds.

      Before she jumped she saw a figure approaching her but she didn't care she needed to finish this, she needed to be free, she needed to forget.

      She steps backward, closes her eyes, and falls into the ocean at exactly twelve midnight.

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