Song: Angel by New Kids on the Block
1959
Gordie LaChance
I couldn't stop thinking about her. I mean, I've had crushes before, but I didn't think about them 24/7. This was different, I could tell. I was infatuated.
I needed to see her again, so I came back. I was almost at the ice cream shop, and I could feel the excitement in my fingertips. I sincerely hoped she was there.
As I started to see the pastel blue walls of the ice cream shop, I smiled stupidly. She was there. In the same spot, with the same drink. She had a different colour dress on, and the ribbon in her hair was different as well. She must come here everyday.
I guess I'll come everyday then.
I watched as she threw her hands up in the air, she looked kind of annoyed. I wonder what was upsetting her.
I wish I could talk to her.
Carmen Patel
"My sister is so rude," I said to Mario. Complaining was my best quality, and although Mario didn't like it, he had gotten used to my endless whining.
Mario knew how annoying my sister was, though. I wasn't the only one who had a problem with Reylynn Patel.
"What'd she do this time?" Mario asked.
I scoffed, "She came home last night at 11:30 in the night! Then, this morning she left at 5! My parents have no idea what she does,"
"It doesn't seem like she's making very good choices. She's a senior, colleges are watching her," Mario said as he wiped down the table.
I threw my hands up, "That's what I tried to tell her!"
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(Edited 1/5/18)
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falling → G. LACHANCE.
Fiksi Penggemar- in which a boy walks past an ice cream shop everyday, just to see her [ gordie lachance short story + completed ] kinda edited but don't expect great grammar tbh
