21// Jeff is a mary sue

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I mean

He is.

I'm not talking like typical kawaii desu~ sues i mean he's overpowered, unrealistic and deeply flawed in story line.

Im gonna do a quick breakdown here

Backstory

His backstory is the typical thing. He moved to a new place, was bullied and felt strange "urges" until he "snapped" and murdered them.

Then got some stupid reason he decided to mutilate his face and kill his family.

This is stupid, reasonless and the most generic lame thing.

The fact that he was able to take on several guys but himself was just ridiculous he's some skinny preteen.

Looks

He wouldn't and shouldn't be white.

That's not how burns work. His skin should be relatively normal coloured, or more red/brown idk look up burns.

His hair wouldn't have just turned black it should be gone. Like bye, it would've been burnt off.

Really he's such a stupid character and then the way the fandom portrays him as some hot womanizer.

He's not good.

Sorry, fangirls.

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