the one with narration

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ugh.

k so this is unacceptable:

my name is jessicagreene i have blue eyes and thick blonde curls. i have had six boyfriends. i'm 5'3 5 inches shorter than Lil Xan i think i might date him. oops... did i mean lil XAN i meant ethan cutkosky sorry they looks alike
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k so imma be nice ab this

your oc should not be talking to u like say the person reading it name was michelle

ur oc should not know michelle

oc: HEY RICK GRIMES U KNOW MICHELLE

rick : whose michelle

oc:  I HAVE NO FUCKING CLUE

rick: don't know who michelle is why're you talking to her

oc: idk why is the author so dumb

rick : idk

oc: we don't care ab michelle

rick: yeha

michelle doesn't matter sorry

basically, if it is first person, the oc should not be telling a story, like this:

let me tell u a story strap in kids

like nope

i dont fw that

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