ugh.k so this is unacceptable:
my name is jessicagreene i have blue eyes and thick blonde curls. i have had six boyfriends. i'm 5'3 5 inches shorter than Lil Xan i think i might date him. oops... did i mean lil XAN i meant ethan cutkosky sorry they looks alike
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k so imma be nice ab thisyour oc should not be talking to u like say the person reading it name was michelle
ur oc should not know michelle
oc: HEY RICK GRIMES U KNOW MICHELLE
rick : whose michelle
oc: I HAVE NO FUCKING CLUE
rick: don't know who michelle is why're you talking to her
oc: idk why is the author so dumb
rick : idk
oc: we don't care ab michelle
rick: yeha
michelle doesn't matter sorry
basically, if it is first person, the oc should not be telling a story, like this:
let me tell u a story strap in kids
like nope
i dont fw that
YOU ARE READING
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