Hi there!
I'm currently working on the second book, thinking about the plot and everything, and so I look back to this every now and then and get, well, triggered. This is one of my first "books," so there are a lot of mistakes in grammar as well as it isn't very descriptive. It's bothering me so much that I actually want to fix it after all this time. The story would stay the same, expect maybe a few small things would change, considering I'd never actually witnessed/seen a pregnancy when I wrote this. Right now, the chapters are crazy short and far from detailed, so it would help you guys (hopefully) enjoy the story and help me think about this without dread filling my stomach.
On a side note, thank you so much for all the reads and votes! With how the writing came out, I never expected it to be so noticed. You have no idea how much I appreciate the ones who added this to their reading lists! Just, thank you!
So, if you've already read it or if you're about to read this, please let me know in the comments on whether I should edit this or not. Also, feel free to even leave suggestions in the chapters. I hope you guys have a wonderful time reading!
~ Layloo 💕
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Love Before Birth | Book One
Short Story{0.5 in the Love Before Birth Series] Two couples: the Reed's and the Alston's have known each other for the longest of time. They've stuck together through middle and high school- even marriage. Now they'll have to help through birth and, of course...
