That one pervy waiter.
You sit down with your significant other and they smile at you from across the table. You see the waiter come with a big smile on his face. You look up at him, "Hello, we would like to order something to eat."
The waiter licks his lips, "You look cute," He lowers his eyes, "What your name, hun?"
Your date then stands up from their seat and starts throwing hands at the waiter.
I've seen and read these types of scenarios too many times to the point where it becomes a cliche. Seriously, if this was in real life the waiter would have been fired so fast. I suggest you avoid writing something like this because we all know what happens next.
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