Rushing the lemons
"I hope we pass the math test tomorrow!" You grinned. "Good thing you're gonna help me study tonight!"
Senpai enters your room with a smirk on his face. He watches you sit down on the floor in front of those short ass tables.
"My parents are gone for the rest of the night and probably won't return home so-" Just as you turned your head around, Senpai's crotch was right in front of your face.
"If you succ me we'll do perfectly on the test," Senpai began to unzip his pants.
"What the fuck?!" You shouted when his length plopped up. "Why didn't you tell me sooner??"
You punched his dick with your mouth.
OR
Senpai lays you on the bed and starts to strip you. Once both of you were naked, he gives you a kiss to calm your nerves.
"VIRGINITY: STEAL!" Senpai shouts and you made an ahegao face.
"SENPAI!!!" You screeched.
"[Y/NNNNN]!!!"
The two of you climaxed and Senpai fell onto the bed next to you.
"Goodnight, Senpai..." You suddenly passed out.
He wraps his arms around your waist, "I love you..."
Pfft
Heheh
AHAHAH
I know I've said this a lot but, this was my writing at the beginning of my Wattpad days. Ahh, memories... I understand how writing smut can be uncomfortable but I'm sure you can pull through it!
Try using this equation when writing the sexy fun times:
Build up sexual tension →
Mention the setting (in a house, hotel, outside, etc.) →
Have the characters engage in some touching →
Pick up the foreplay (deep kissing, direct touching, clothes coming off) →
Preparation (fingering and all that jazz) →
Penetration (in the woman cave or ass or something) →
Try to use dialogue sparingly (don't be like "You went: HHHGGGNN" be humble with the "You moaned shyly: slow down, Senpai") →
Over exaggerate the climax (say something like "YOU DROWNED IN THE CRASHING WAVES OF PLEASURE AS SENPAI FILLS YOU UP" just be descriptive) →
After sex talks or aftercare can help the reader slowly come back to reality =
AND THAT'S HOW TO WRITE SMUT :DD
I could go on and on but I would have to make a whole ass book about it uwu
I would love to help anyone out if they're struggling with writing their smuts! I believe in y'all!!
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RandomHonest to God I don't mean to offend anybody but I just wanna read a good fanfic, man. Yes, my writing also sucks but I just want to point out some of the minor errors I caught in some fanfics and how to avoid them. This book is not focused on any a...
