Too many reader-insert symbols.
My (h/l) (h/c) flowed in the wind while I held my (f/d) in my (s/n) hands. Senpai looks into my (e/c) eyes and not at the (f/m) on the screen.
"Look how beautiful you are [Y/N]!" Senpai whispered against my (s/c) lips.
Honestly, it becomes very frustrating and hard to keep up sometimes. The reader would usually become overwhelmed and try their best to remember what the code (f/l) means again (It's fingernail length).
You should normally include one (1), at most two (2), in one paragraph. This is a good way to have readers feel like they're really in the story. Maybe add a legend if you want. Just make the reading go smoothly.
Thanks, @zuriiya for submitting!! (1/6)
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