Being cringy. (Kazu's old writing habits)
[RUDEEEEE -Kazu]
For example, when people do that weird thing where they make the main character tsundere and/or adding an eyepatch attachment on your face hole, like honestly what happened for you to unlock the eyepatch attachment bin to your face, I doubt that you will come up with a legitimate backstory to the eyepatch.
For example, what Kazu wrote way back. When she made her OC have an eyepatch and be a tsundere BECAUSE APPARENTLY there was a chemical malfunction in the laboratory where she worked. Like if you were working in a laboratory you would be wearing protective equipment or something like that like it just doesn't add up.
I know I'm exposing Kazu but this will help her improve!
In the end, avoid making your characters tsundere with the optional eyepatch attachment, but if you do... make sure to add some backstory to it in order to have it make sense.
THANK YOU~
-Kazu's editor person humanoid thing
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