Adding -chan, -kun, -sama, -senpai, and other language shenanigans.
"[Y/N]-chan do you want to go watch a movie together?" Senpai leans against your locker coolly.
While putting away your books, you looked up at him with sad eyes. "I'm sorry Senpai but Bad Boy-kun already asked me to go with him..."
"N-Nani?!?!" Senpai slams his fist against the metal. "Do you not suki me anymore?!?! Why does it have to be Bad Boy-kun??"
"Matte, Senpai-sama-kun!" You grabbed onto Senpai's uniform to stop him from leaving. "How about all three of us go together??"
"[Y/N]-chan, do you not understand that we're love rivals?" Senpai presses the back of his hand against his forehead. "Bad Boy-kun will tatakai me...!"
Since Bad Boy-kun's name was said three times, he appeared.
"Don't you dare touch [Y/N]-chan like that!" Bad Boy-kun's hand grabbed Senpai's collar.
"Sensei, there are boys fighting!" Student-san shouted.
"やめなさい、あなたはばか." Said Sensei.
Breath in, breath out.
I'm gonna call myself out, I DO THIS FOR SURE. (Sometimes as a joke and sometimes for my actual fanfics!)
During my early years of writing my stories, I wasn't really exposed to the honorifics. I mostly saw through roughly translated anime subtitles and other fanfics.
So I did some shit like that ^^
Anyways, I'm sure you can write Japanese honorifics as long as you don't overuse them!
However with the other language shenanigans, just... don't Haha...
It's weird, no one understands them, and it just looks bad for the writing.
But remember, there's plenty of room and time to improve your fanfics! Don't give up!
Suki = like
Tatakai = fight
やめなさい、あなたはばか = stop you idiots
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