W/ Turned Out: Oh, there are several different things here.
-Wardrobe: I had many people say that Ash dresses like a seventeen year old. Wrong. Us seventeen year olds dress like we're 21. I'll admit it. The things in my closet are a bit grown... I think Ash dresses appropriately for her age and her career. She could use some more adult clothes as well, she just hasn't reached that point in life yet.
-Childish Behavior: I have also had people complain about Ashleigh being childish. There's no denying it. Ash is dumb, naive, and childish a lot of the time. That's her character and it's literally been that since day one. It's not going to change until someone shows her differently.
-I could go on for days about things throughout Turned Out, but I'm not. I realize nothing is perfect. I will go through and fix whatever I feel needs changing, more explaining, or whatever may be the case when this is done. Then I'll write another authors note telling you all if the changes are major or not.
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Turned Out
General FictionAshleigh Dawson is a preachers daughter. She's always wanted to explore life outside of the just being a pk. Now Ashleigh is 21, living alone, and is finally able to achieve all of her free spirited dreams. (For a mature audience only.)
