Nettlestar's Truimph (Warrior Cats Story) {being re-written}

Chapter 10

The whole 'clan' was silent.
Nettle panted angrily, Seth pressed against her side.
"You're an idiot," Shade hissed. "Fangstar wouldn't do any of that."
"Shut up, boytoy," Nettleclaw snarled instantly.
Seth chuckled slightly, looking at the tom. You never mess with Nettle.
Fangstar was bristling by now. "You both are going to be punished—" He began
"For hurting your loverboy?" Nettle demanded in interruption. Fangstar ignored her.
"You two are not to go within ten feet of each other," Fang snarled. Nettleclaw's eyes widened.
"You can't!"
Seth growled lowly. "You don't have the right to do that."
Her brother sneered at Seth. "I'm leader. My word is LAW. Now GO AWAY."
Nettleclaw looked down. "Can we at least go get Moon??"
"I was going to do that, by you guys may go." Nettleclaw was surprised as her brother answered her.
"Make sure you go West," He added, his tail flicking. He limped off, Shade following with a last glare.
Seth looked at Nettleclaw. "Let's go."
But the gray she-cat was thinking. That wasn't the way to Vein Alley..
"Seth, he's trying to trick us!" Nettle lowered her voice and he leaned in as she whispered, "Let's trick him by arriving at the right place!"
Seth laughed. "You're brilliant," He responded, his ears perking up. He licked her ears gently.
Nettleclaw felt her pelt heat up in embarrassment.
"I'm not, really! But let's go!"