Ah, good old Poopsy. A classic example of all the no-no's in the Creepypasta community.
To start off, the clothes are something a good OC would never be caught dead wearing (did you get the pun?). They are not suitable for what Poopsy does, which I will get on to later. The top really exposes her breasts, which is not ideal for an OC. She should also wear more suitable pants, since it could get pretty cold and shorts aren't the greatest choice for the winter. Finally, she has the Operator symbol on her shirt. WHY?!?! Last time I checked, this is what the symbol meant:
It acts as a ward to keep him away.
It's a warning sign.
The girl is a proxy, for goodness' sakes! Also, she has blue hair. Why would she have blue hair? That makes no sense. When did this girl get her hands on blue hair dye? And her waist is the size of a Barbie. SHE'S ELEVEN! Yes, I said 11. Normally, I don't have a problem with age, but this is just stupid.
She works for Slenderman. If you didn't know already, he eats children. Poopsy is a kid herself. Why is she still alive? What does she have to offer Slenderman? I would like to know. Along with her age, what eleven year old has breasts that large? It's unnatural.
Let's take a look at her relationship status. In love with Jeff Woods, huh? Well, I have news for you honey.
That's. A. Bad. Move.
No one likes it when an OC is shipped with Jeff. I repeat, NO ONE. It doesn't make you special and it doesn't make your character popular. If it does, it's in a negative light. Also, the kid's 11. If she's involved in a relationship with this guy, it's not a good one. He's definitely older than her, probably over 5 years. I really hope it's one sided on Poopsy's part.
Her weapon is a bit cliché, that's all I'm gonna say.
Her job description says killer and proxy. Don't proxies already kill? It's either one or the other. Make up your mind.
She lives in the Slender Mansion. She lives in an AU. The Slender Mansion is fanmade, so I doubt it would be real. Like any other bad OC.
Did I mention that her torso and face is a different color than her legs? That's just downright weird.
Thank you for reading! Please comment suggestions for other rants.
