The appearance doesn't look too bad. It's not scary, but not incredibly terrible, but there's a reason why she was on Mary Sue Facepalm. I'm scared.
"This is my Creepypasta OC, Scarlet Death... Originally her name was Death Bloom but I've been changing some things around with my OCs lately. As you can see now I've added wings to her and made her eyes black considering she is a demon..."
Ok... even though the wings look weird.
"Still working on her backstory, but she was exiled by her father, the Grim Reaper, from her home because she can be go a little overboard on killing sometimes."
WTF?!?! Last time I checked, demons and reapers DON'T MIX AT ALL. Even though I'm going by Black Butler rules, this doesn't seem right, no matter the circumstance. How did he have a demon child? Also, I'm not surprised by the "go a little overboard on killing sometimes." All of the bad Creepypasta OCs are obsessed with killing.
"And now she studies with a fellow reaper from The town of Silent Hill by the name of Xuchilbara/Pyramid Head."
???? I just looked him up, and he is nowhere near a grim reaper. This is so wrong, I can't even describe it.
"She seeks to prove herself worthy to hold the title of Reaper and wishes one day to return to her home in the Underworld and take up her father's role. She wishes to control her hunger for bloodshed... Or else she will be stuck in the world of mortals forever."
This isn't even remotely scary. She just wants her father's approval? I would think she was a Disney princess without the context, minus the cliché "loves blood and killing."
"Name: Scarlet Death
Age: Immortal, but year-wise... 1300 years
Favorite color: Black
Weapon: Double-bladed Bloodlust Scythe"
Age : Immortal???? That's not how it works, at all. Also, what the frick is a double-bladed bloodlust scythe? It sounds like an anime weapon. Is it?
"Family: Grim Reaper (father)
Friends: Pyramid Head, Alessa Gilesspie, Slender Man, Elizabeth Slender (my first OC), Sexual Offenderman (refuses to ever accept the rose from him and usually beats him up if he tries anything, lol), Jeff the Killer, Molly Madness (another of my OCs), Valtiel, Samael, and Lord Zalgo."
What happened to the mother? The Grim Reaper can't just simply reproduce. At least mention her. Also, I doubt she would make friends with these people. It seems highly unlikely.
"Abilities: able to steal souls and use them to regenerate if she loses a limb,"
What?
"mind control, blood magic, hex, able to cast afflictions of terminal illnesses onto mortals, Possession,"
How are these related to grim reapers?
"Kiss of Death (steals a dying being's last breath),"
FINALLY, SOMETHING RELATED TO REAPERS!
"Shapeshifter, fast, deadly, precise with striking, stealthy, able to look into the future once in a while, is not effected by Lord Zalgo's power."
Hello, overpowered character! Also, Zalgo is the most powerful character everywhere. I highly doubt that she would be able to not be affected by his powers.
"Enemies: Lucifer, the Undead, impure Vampires (mortals who had turned and cheated Death)"
THAT'S NOT HOW VAMPIRES WORK, GENIUS!
"Crush?: Has a crush on her friend, Lord Zalgo, but is afraid that she is not worthy for someone as powerful as him."
.... Zalgo is basically the Devil in Creepypasta. He's not a romantic at all.
I just realized that she doesn't have a birth name mentioned .... if was she seriously named Scarlet Death, I will scream? The Reaper has to have some standards.
