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You find yourself in a black room with ono light except a single candle. When you approach the candle a figure appears.

He explains that if you go through a set of trials held by his friend you can live and be reborn, but if you fail you get thrown back Into the depths of hell with no chance of ever regenerating. You have to accept the trials.

After you accept you are thrown into a dark woods. A girl is there to greet you. 

All she asks is that you play a few games with her. She will ask to play tag, then hide and seek, then if you survive both games she will ask you to play one last game which I cannot say what it is. But the game ends when one of you is dead. You win if you kill her.

After either you die or the girl dies you wake up woth a start somehow in a new room. A man Is there, smirking at you. 

He will ask you if you know about the circle of life. Then he will ask you if you know about predator and prey. After that he will lunge at you, expecting you to dodge. After that the chase begins. If he catches you in an hour, he will eat you and you will die. If you survive the hour you will fall into another trial from him. A one on one fight. If you win, he dies. If he wins  you die.

After his trial you wake up again, just like last time, to see a woman rummaging through a drawer. 

She will then come over to you with a whip. She will whip your shoulder and snicker. She will tell you that you may want to run. She doesn't explain why. If you don't run, she will try to catch you to torture you. But if you run you have a chance. In the maze you're trapped now in, weapons are hidden. If you find one and kill her, you win. But if she captures you, you lose. 

Now, if you killed them you end up back in the room from before with the same man as before. He will just smile at you and snap his fingers. It's over.

If you got captured by the woman, you will be tied up in a black room just like before. The man from the begining and everyone else will be there. They wish you good luck on your next life.

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