ALTERNATE ENDING: PT 1

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A/N: I want to put this in the front because you need this information... this is to change the ending after chapter 15. I had 2 few requests to post this since I mentioned it before so here it is. If you don't want to see Maddy die please don't read any of these alternate ending parts!! I'm working on the last part now, should be up within the hour but here's 1 and 2 is next

David got out of Jason's car in front of the front doors and sprinted up to the ICU. The door to Maddy's room was closed and Mr. Laurent was standing in the hallway in tears.

"What's going on?" David asked.

A doctor came around the corner and ushered David to his office before Mr. Laurent had the chance to speak.

"We did everything we could" Were the first words out of her mouth.

"No" David said. "What do-"

"David, Maddy passed away about 15 minutes ago"

David blacked out. He didn't faint, but he completely stopped taking in information.

"I wasn't here" He sobbed. "She died alone"

"She didn't, David, her parents and sister got here a few minutes before. She wasn't alone"

"I didn't say goodbye" He was pacing around the room, tears streaming down his face. "I didn't get to say goodbye"

"She wouldn't have been able to hear you anyway, David, I assure you-"

David walked out of the room and back to where Mr. Laurent was standing. He immediately embraced him in tears, both crying hysterically.

"Is she still in there?" David asked.

Mr. Laurent nodded. David walked past him into the room where Mrs. Laurent and Elle were seated next to Maddy's bed, crying. David did not seem to notice; he walked in and looked at Maddy for a moment. She was no longer hooked up to any machines, and was just laying there with her eyes closed. David was overcome by a wave of nausea, but was able to prevent himself from actually vomiting. Mrs. Laurent and Elle were silent as David slowly approached the bed, as if his motions could potentially wake Maddy up. He got closer and stared at her, before gently reaching down at putting his hand on hers. He knelt down next to her bed, holding her hand in his as he sobbed. His phone was buzzing incessantly, but he didn't even notice. It wasn't until Elle put her hand on his shoulder that he looked up.

Elle, a spitting image of Maddy, freaked him out for a moment before his brain processed who it was. She took his hand and pulled him up and into a hug. She then released him, smiled lightly, and stepped out of the room with her mom, leaving David alone. He sat on the chair next to Maddy and looked at her one last time.

"I love you so much, Maddy" He said. "I'm sorry I couldn't tell you one last time"

He then stood up and walked out of the room, not looking back.



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