Simply Rejected

Part 15

~3rd POV~ (okay so like some people do this thing where they say ~no one's~ like that's just no stop it's called 3rd Point of View)

"save it." said Chat Noir. Since he transformed back he stopped looking moody. Wearing the mask has a strange magic affect on their picture. Heck Marinette spend DAYS staring at Adriens face but couldn't see it in Chat Noir.

Chat Noir walked over to the window he could see Natalie putting things in the car. He jumped out of the window down beside his driver. Rena Rouge followed. Chat Noir knocked on the window and the driver rolled it down. "Adrien is in trouble. He's at <obscure place 20 minuets away> and needs a ride. His phone is broken so he can't pick up. He needs you." The body guards adorably strong loyalty to the boy he had spent more time caring about than his own father kicked in. He sped off despite Natalie still putting things in the trunk.

Natalie reached for her gun but Rena and Chat were already out of her reach. Chat Noir got into the front of the main room of his mansion. He closed the door knowing he had a little bit of time before Natalie could set off an Alarm

he looked for his father. Hah, his 'father' the man who had put thousands of Paris pedestrians in danger. He wasn't really a father if he had never raised his son.

Chat opened his room door making it appear as if he had ran out at some point. He looked in all of the rooms. His search for Hawkmoth was stooped very abruptly by a crash coming from the main Hall.

~HawkMom~

Nooroo had told Gabriel to never ever Akumatize himself. He felt on the edge of his seat waiting for something to happen. Using your own power on yourself caused something to happen. If it ended badly it could corrupt a miraculous such as the peacock miraculous. He knew this could either end two ways. Him winning or him dying.

His features became sharper. the edges of his miraculous, the little black things -that as I am writing this I realize look incredible stupid-,his shoulders, and probably his elbows too. His light grey mask became black and his stupid black spike things on his shoulders became grey.

He put his forehead on his wife's coffin as if she was only asleep and he was reading her thoughts. He flew upward and punched through the ceiling he came out in the Main hall.

He sat in a chair and waited. ominously the lights went out. He probably hit a electricity cord that was in the floor, it was probably also just the author setting the mood. The only light in the room was the light of the moon coming in through the tall windows

Almost thirty seconds after the crash Chat Noir and Rena Rouge appeared from the direction of his son's room. He glared at the two as they locked eye contact the dark hallway behind them reminded him of something. His son was probably in his room Scared and confused.

Well frick Gabe you kinda suck for abandoning your CHILD one of your few connections to your wife besides the fricken creap ppy coffin!

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also PLEASE point out my mistakes in comments I want to know what I can improve. I know I have a comma and a pacing problem.