22. readers' comments (rondel)

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heart flutters lightly
wonder sweetens soul
coiled emotions unroll
forever withheld tightly

brain sours slightly
over joys heart stole
heart flutters lightly
wonder sweetens soul

eyes sparkle brightly
smiling out of control
a pleased face they extol
coloring cheeks rightly
heart flutters lightly

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©AmaliaAbbar22122018

Rondel is a French form consisting of 13 lines: two quatrains and a quintet, rhyming as follows: ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.

Source: shadowpoetry.com

A/N: Well... The title says it all!! 🙈 I just can't thank you guys enough!! Your comments make my days! They give me pleasure, hope and sheer joy!! You build me. Each one of you. I am all for hugging through cyberspace so here are hugs 🤗🤗 and an additional gift- chocolates! 🍫🍫🍫With hearts! 💕💖 Custom made XD

Haha my goofiness aside, this poem is a token of my gratitude for all your help :)))) I love you all!!!

Oh mahn I just realized I sound like a celebrity LOL. Arrogant and full of myself XD anyway this is how I get when I am overwhelmed - cheesy and goofy and affectionate!!! LOL. And I share chocolates from my secret stash hehe! Also, I just noticed that Paper Wings got a lot of reads over such a short time although I hear only from a few. Thanks to all the silent readers who keep me in their library. I am eternally grateful for your time!! :))))))

Okay that's enough blabbering for this year XD

I hope you had a lovely weekend! 🎊🎈💜

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