The Lucky Ones [Watty Awards 2012]

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Knives

Good on you for not making this a cliche. You can really feel her emotions, there really raw and noticeable. Voted..

LizzyFord Great story! I think when we realize finally that there's no such thing as the storybook happily ever after - that life is about molding our worlds instead of reaching a utopia - is when we can be truly happy, because then we stop trying to live the ideal happily-ever-after and create our own, personally tailored happiness. :-) I think the main narrator is on that track, and I hope she learns to create her own happily-ever-after! She deserves it after dealing with such jerks LOL

yeah she tweeted me too and i cried during this. Bc I have felt almost the same thing at an unbelievable young age and it still hurts

KaylaKeifer

I like how you started out with adding the reason for the title. It may be weird, but I could totally picture this as a movie. The intro paragraph was like, a voice over that was playing while the camera panned over the sun and past some trees and all that. :)

FMAGIRL22

OMG! HEHE- I really loved this story... I had moments like this too. It just makes me think back on my tragic love stories. Make sure you give feedback on mine, more chapters coming soon. Keep writing!!! I LOVED IT.

Veronique

That's really great advise. :)

Never neglect friends for a love, friendship is meant to never end. <3

Mokkey

Loving the beginning! Really really looking forward to the rest! :) This is, by far, the best story I have read this month ;)

MayaCedeno

Omgg I love this <3 its AMAZING! You're a great writer :) its just- I cant even explain haha xx

pand500

Wow.... it's just so amazing and touching..... I love it :)