Please God No.

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RANT TIME!!!!

(Told ya there would be rants)

I'm sorry, I know a LOT of people have ranted about this, but it's such an HUGE PROBLEM. What is it?

BAD.

FAN.

FICTIONS!!!!

Like I was checking out the top fanfictions right now (Mainly 1D and 5SOS, no shocker) and it has all these likes and comments and stuff, and this is what it looks like:

    SUPER MAINSTREAM NAME (let's chose.... Ashley)  (If your name is Ashley, sorry, but there' a lot of ya!) P.O.V

"ashley!" my mom calls! "the boy you just met is on the phone!!11! you know, the one wit da tatts and smoke and yeah? he wants you to go on tour with him across the country!!! I say yay! :D XD :3 Luv u 5 eva!"

"ok, thank you mum!~!!" I quicky pulld on m bagy PINK swater and legins and uggs an i put on maskcara an eyeliner an lipstick an blush an yea an looked at m super skiny bod an my perfectly clear face an my perfect brown hare. wow!1!!!111 I iz ugly!!!"

Stop.

Just...

Stop.

No.

NO.

NO!

So many things wrong with this.....

Also, PEOPLE DON'T KNOW HOW TO USE COMMAS!!!!

It's like that Tumblr post or whatever it is:

Let's eat Grandma!

Let's eat, Grandma!

Commas. They save lives.

But I LITERALLY just saw a fan fiction and it sounded like it had a good plot, but right when I read the first paragraph, I refused to read more. Why? This is what it looked like:

"Hi! My name is Todd! This is Ashley Hanna Maria John Sam Wendy Peter Pan Adam Ty Tyler Kyle Kyler Spiler Skylox Desu Despair Kylie Quinn Niall Harry Louis Liam Zayn Naegi Asahina Alfred and Arthur!"

Like, wow. Nice name you got there. Pretty long too. Must suck to spell it.

COMMAS.

THEY'RE THERE FOR A REASON!!!

I don't even wanna talk about it anymore.... Ugh.

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