I'm not ending the book yet. Don't worry it's not goodbye yet. I just need some feedback. What do you guys think of this story so far? I know one person said they'd like for each chapter to be longer and I do too but at the same time I feel like some parts deserve a chapter of its own and I also never been a fan of making a chapter more than 1500 words. Usually I aim for 1500 but I think the average for this book is between 500-800 words. I think, not sure if it is. Tell me how you feel I'm writing the characters because I feel like it's too out of character, I feel the only thing right I'm getting is how overprotective the twins are towards each other. I know Wanda has been portrayed to be insecure and unstable with her powers in both comics and the MCU. Quicksilver in comics and Fox's interpretation is a sarcastic person. Both struggle with a mental illness of their own and I'm debating on whether to include their mental illness here or not. Pietro is a sociopath while Wanda has depression and Lorna is bipolar. Just give me some constructive criticism because I do need it! I don't care if you sound negative in criticizing me, I need to know where I need to improve. Don't feel bad if you think you're being a terrible person by saying stuff that you feel is hurtful, I know you guys want this to be a good story as much as I do. Just don't insult me like saying: You're dumb!. Just say like: "Hey this is something you're missing" or "The characters are too OOC. Maybe make them more like this". Thank you for any help you all can provide and I'll get you that update ASAP! Thank you for your support and I'll see you all next time!
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Fanfiction(Based on Fox's The Gifted) (Slow updates sorry) "The Maximoff girl has the potential to rewrite reality", Esme smiled at Reeva. Sophie's hands were behind her back, she knew what the Scarlet Witch could do. She also knew what Lorna could do should...
