-Unnamed pt. 1- (*old v. new)

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It was silent, dark, cold.
No sound or sight to be seen for miles
I took another step. Small.
The air was cold against my bare skin.
I took another step. Foot touching the platform.
'Cold' is all I thought.
Icy steps lead to the seat. Mine.
I didn't sit down like last time.
I moved to the edge.
Looking left then right.
I saw...nothing. Nothing of interest anyway. Nothing that stood out the dark.
All I could do was laugh at how impossible this is, but entirely real at the same time.
My laugh came out dry and hoarse as if I just woke. I stopped.
I'm alone.

Years old. Honestly, the grammar is frustrating me.

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