Rant 53) 12 year old Akatsuki members (stop please)

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Short ass rant here. But ffs why? Stop you mongrels freaks.

My god... I came across another Koharu 2.0 but better! I swear this one is hilarious and blunt here. You'll not drop your eyes from this travesty and think twice of your life decisions after this story description.

Is it just me here

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Is it just me here... or should I start making my story descriptions so bad that I MUST reveal the entire story in the description for clicks. I think I shall do this now.

I am done.

So I know that these characters aren't going to be good in the first chapter like most books

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So I know that these characters aren't going to be good in the first chapter like most books. So of course I tend to read further a bit to see any improvements at all here. And no... I really don't usually see anything that's much improvement at all. If you're OC is straight off strong asf in the beginning with crazily enormous powers at the age of 4, became a Chuunin at the age of 5, and ANBU member at the age of 6 really says you can't write a proper story with a background.

So I won't even open this book since I'm not contented with this garbage right now.

I'll be writing another huge rant on another few books later. Just please STOP with the kid Akatsuki members. Pein doesn't want to deal with children who can blow up the entire universe like Goku can do.

Or any kid training in the Akatsuki for some reason that I don't want to know. I already ranted about this before of TRAINING in the Akatsuki. That's like... irrelevant since the Akatsuki came in for one purpose only so the shenanigans here with these extra OCs training in the Akatsuki just blows the entire purpose of the Naruto concept here. So stop with this shit and grow some originality of a plot.

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