Remember– I don't edit these rants. If I did, my grammar wouldn't be shit! I only edit my stories... oh god me here.
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I must add how this story has over 700k+ reads makes me question why Wattpad loves to mind shit unpopular authors. Recently I've been getting reads for one of my stories off this disease you call a website. And that's really fucking sad...
Also, today is a typical rant of how I hateeeeeee when you're reading a reader insert and then you're a FUCKING Mary-sue.
This surname alone makes me question if it was just made up. "Sounds JAPANESE!" when it clearly sounds like you just through in Japanese syllables together thinking it sounds like a Japanese surname. And when I type it in the google search bar, I find no meaning behind the name.
Anyways, let's all bet this special "sugar coated" Kekkei Genkai is probably some Hidden OVER POWERED technique of hers. I'm quite curious actually here. I love destroying some made up Kekkei Genkai shouldn't exist typical plot.
Also, now we have the village who worships the girl here. Oh wait– I mean yourself. The OC thinks she has no one and is all alone. Which the village LOVES her compare to Naruto.
I'm gonna still call her an OC! I'm not going to make myself a Mary-sue. Why thank you.
Ayeeeee - chapter 1
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