Another revised poem. Original version was written back when I was in Grade 6 and some parts were a fail hahaha. Thank you again to my friend Jaja for editing ;)
For the lonely hearts out there; Love when your are truly ready, not when you are lonely.~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
A LONELY HEART'S FAULT
I have been all alone
Yearning for true love in my heart.
Until you came along,
I thought now would be the start.As I felt our bond grow closer,
The shyness in me did not even bother.
I opened up my whole self to you,
Not knowing it would just turn me blue.One day when we were happily talking,
Someone came up to us and both of you started kissing!
I stared at what was ruining my fantasy,
and was dumbfounded to see it was reality.The two of you were engaged.
I wanted to be outraged!
In a million pieces my heart broke,
"I love you so much," I croaked.But it's no use now anyway,
As both of you turned and walked away.
Leaving me all alone again,
Yet it's too late because I've fallen.
© Monica Zara H. Villadarez
Revised: 04 September 2014
Edited: 04 October 2014
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Love me, Love me not [POETRY]
PoetryCollection of poems originally written. Poems about, love, heartbreak and whatnot. Written in full English. Although I'm a proud Filipino, I'm not really good in writing Filipino/Tagalog poems, peace! I'm still in practice so helpful tips and adv...