Behind The Words About The Prologue.

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(N/A/N): Ok by the time you read this, I am working Chapter 1 or done it but looking through it, I might as well share some ideas that was going to be on the Prologues. so here we go.

Prologue 1

(N/A/N): So first thing first. At the beginning of the Prologue, Peter line was going to be was instead of saying this.

Peter: Why were you in the basement hiding behind the curtains were my Halloween costume are?

(N/A/N): It will be something like this.

Peter: Why were you in the basement hiding behind the curtains were my Spider suit are?

(N/A/N): By the time you read this it has been changed so the Halloween word would be changed into Spider suit in the first Prologue. P.S. please check if I did change it, thank you. Because as I published it, I forgot to change. So it has been changed. Anyway, at the end of the Prologue there was going a little longer. After when Miss. Betty said gone about Peter and Mary Jane Weston, (Y/N) will denied what she said about his parents and you know stuff like that. That's all the stuff I had going on so next Prologue.

Prologue 2

(N/A/N): So where do I start. Ok the Beginning. The original plan for the main character will not know that his dad was Spider-Man and from the news he will know. So basically what I'm saying that the main character parents keep a secret from him about Spider-Man. The next thing is about what this Prologue was going to about. So originally was this Prologue is going to be about the Rose family adopted him, the abuse, and the runaway in one Prologue. But as I was writing, I did have a limit of how much I want to write. So the runaway and the abuse will be in the next Prologue. Anyway, the next deleted part was Salem was not going to be in here or mention. It was just going to have (Y/N) walk back safely and once he come back safely, Miss Betty will told him that he's being adopted by a family and you know. But Salem will still be mentioned in the later Prologue, it Just pop up for some I added. That all there is, I think, so next Prologue.

Prologue 3

(N/A/N): Ok this was a hard Prologue to write, there was not much in this that was change except for one thing. My original plan was to have Raven to be on (Y/N) side, but I changed that to what you know. I have copies of them so her they are. These original wore after the sentence 'As I was washing the dishes, Raven spoke' so here they are

Deleted Part #1

Raven: So, what time are you leaving tomorrow?

My heart drop like a brick. How does she know? I try to think of something, but there was nothing that I could escape that one. So I sigh and I respond as I washed the dishes.

(Y/N): Why do you care?

Raven: I don't, but how come you didn't leave sooner?

(Y/N): Cuz If I do than I would get forced by Tai or Summer to come back here.

Raven: True. Does Ruby know?

(Y/N) No, no she doesn't.

Raven: It best if she doesn't know.

(Y/N): How long have you know?

Raven: I heard your conversation with my brother about this code word.

(Y/N): Looked whatever. Your properly going to tell the others.

Raven: Actually no.

I stopped with confusion. I turn to Raven with a confused look.

(Y/N): Wait really,

Raven: Yeah, there's no point having you here is there. So this is the only time I'm letting you runaway.

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