A Spider That Once Was A Rose (Slow Update)

Behind The Words 3 (About Act 2)

(N/A/N): Welcome back to another Behind the Words, where I talked about things that were in the Chapters or that were taken out. Anyway let's begin shall we.

Chapter 6

(N/A/N): Ok, first thing first, Raven Branwen. I was going to reveal her apeirons in the 5th chapter, but change because I don't want the 5th chapter to be as long as it is. So I thought it was best to put it in this chapter. The double flashback was for me strange and sorry if it was long, but then again how would Raven know where (Y/N)/You are. The next part was getting the rest of the Avengers kids. I decided to have the rest of them to append in this chapter instead of one at a time, which would take awhile for me to do, so I said to myself "Let have the rest of the 3 characters to appear here" and I did just that. That's all I could think of, soooooooo next chapter.

Chapter 7

(N/A/N): Ok let star at the beginning of the chapter. Orgigely the chapter was going to start with (Y/N)/Your POV instead of Ozpin. But the more I thought about it, I realized the only chapter that didn't start with (Y/N)/Your POV was the first prologue I did. I might do another chapter in the future where it's someone else's POV listed of (Y/N)/your's in the next act. Will see. Ok the next thing I want to not fully share, but something I want to be disgusted about. Ok so the part I want to talk about was the News reporter talking about something else. She was going to say something that might spoil something in the future, but I want to save that later at the end of the story. But I need to talk to the original author about it to see if I'm allowed. I know it's now my version, but I still need to ask and will see how they feel about it, But if not that then it's ok. Anyway, I won't say what it was, but all I'm going to say is...It would make this story...bigger then it is. Don't guess in the comments, but I want you to think about it. Ok so that's all I could talk about this chapter, so let go to chapter 8

Chapter 8

(N/A/N): Ok first, Venom. Venom did appear in the original story, but only for a Chapter. Which was the last chapter of the story and then it got discontinued, but I'm not mad, just to let everyone know that. Anyway, as I was thinking of ideas, I was trying to think of a way for Venom to appear in my version of the story. So I decided to have him in that mysterious suitcase. Originally I was going to have the Iron Spider suit appear here, but change of plans I guess. Sorry. And another one I wanted to talk about is (Y/N)/you have Mister negative power. I don't want to give out too much, but all that I'm going to say is an Idea that I have in my mind from the start and later on I'll be explaining how (Y/N)/you got it.

Chapter 9

(N/A/N): So chapter 9...is probably the goriest chapter I've made so far. There's not alot of it, but still. So as I was writing this, I wanted to have the dream end at Yang and the other difreint voices said "everyone hates you" the Yang will punch (Y/N)/you and that were the dream ends, but as I was writing...I didn't stop there. I was, but I decided to go a little evil. So I keep on writing, I decided to make where Ruby Rose appears in the dream, but is angry because she found out about (Y/N)/you and she just goes brutal. I wanted to continue, but then I thought "I think that's good enough" and I ended the dream right there. Another thing I wanted to talk about is Ryuko finding out that (Y/N)/you is Spider-Man. I wanted that to be in the next chapter, but then I thought "let make this interesting" and I went on with the idea. That's it for this chapter, on to the next one.

Chapter 10

(N/A/N): As I was writing this Chapter, I wanted to have some badass moment, but I thought "Let save that later.'' and you can probably guess. Another thing that was going to have The Inner Demons talk in mandarin or chinese like in the game. Thay do speak english, but most of the time they speak in mandarin. So I went to google translator and yeah, but I decided to have them speak in english. But If you guys want then to speak in mandarin, I could edit the Chapter where they do speak in mandarin, but not now, but soon. The next thing that needs to be talked about is the bonding of Venom. I wanted to have it later, but I thought, Maybe everyone wants the symbiote suit now. So yeah, but that doesn't mean you lose the advanced suit. You will use it again soon, but not for like a couple chapters. and finally is having Satsuki, Mako and Martin Li know (Y/N)/your identity. I will explain how Martin Li knows soon, but I want to talk about why Satsuki and Mako found out. I want to make things more interesting and also to make things easier, later on no one else will know, but to have Satsuki and Mako to be trusted with this secret and make things easier to do Spider-Man stuff.

(N/A/N): Ok that's all I have to say and sorry if there wasn't any interesting things, But I'll see you all in Act 3.