Hey there!
Requested by someone -.-
In the first place, the story was entitled: MICHIGAN (Hunt N' Kill)
Now, I changed it to Hunt and Kill (Michigan's Untold Story)
Hindi ko iniba ang plot ng story.
At gaya ng mga napag-usapan NAMIN, yun pa rin ang susundin ko.
Iniba ko lang yung mga way ng pagsusulat namin to gain more readers.
Dinagdagan ko rin ng extra characters and situations.
About naman sa mga naisulat na TOUGHTS ng co-writers ko, yung pa rin ang gagamitin ko. Hindi nga lang pareho ng eksaktong naisulat niyo.
At para kay bea...try sending me your toughts, para ma-approvan ko naman, kukunin ko sandali para i-double check, change grammatical errors. And i-tatry kong haluan ng kabaliwan ko.
Pinalitan ko ang original title na 'Michigan' to 'Hunt and Kill' , kasi feeling ko, hindi papasok sa isip ng ibang readers na hanapin ang Michigan. Nandyan naman ang the word 'Hunt' and 'Kill', na mas may posibility na hanapin ng ibang readers.
And bea....Try to inform our other co-writers that I am still continuing this for the sake of the memory na minsan tayong nabuo at naisipang gumawa ng ganitong klase ng story. Don't note that I'm emotional.
And I think na bukod sa ating dalawa, feeling ko na Wala na silang pakialam sa story . Hindi na nga nila makamusta sa akin ang story, ni walang . 'Uy, may idea na ako para sa susunod na chapter', 'Hey, isasali pa ba natin yung ganyan sa story','Kailan mo maiipost yung next update'.
See, wala akong nararamdamang moral support for them.
They just enjoy their vacations, habang ako...nag iisip kung ano na ang sunod kong i uupdate.
At sa pagkakaalam ko...Nagquit na yung sila, tinamad ituloy yung story, hindi ko nga lang alam kung ano yung tawag don, it's something...tigas ubi? Bigas Uban? Kidding aside. But it's really on the end of my tounge!!! Comment kayo kung alam niyo yung tinutukoy ko.
And kung gagawa ka ng chapter...I prefer the not too deep tagalog. Haluan natin ng something conyo or english. Yung conyo na...first sentence tagalog, then the next is english, third is english, fourth is english, and the last is tagalog. Nevermind that, it's just an example. Sayang naman kasi ang english skills natin. And make it more creative in your own way. Feel the story okay?
By the way, bea, I like your story, Sour to Sweet huh! Pffft! Natatawa lang talaga ako sa cover. I suggest na mag-update ka...and sa cover mo, it's better to use one picture where the two are together and the expressed feeling should be present in the picture.
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