A New Adventure: A Sophitz

Your hair!

So... Hi. This is my first fanfic. I've put a lot of thought in this, so hope you like. Please comment and vote, I guess. I have no clue how this works. I'm going to have my friend help when she can but bye, and thanks.😉

So..... here we go! Thought Sophie, she was actually going to do it. She was going to......
              Three hours earlier;
(Sophie's POV)
"No, no no, no!!!!" I screamed, this is the third time this week I've woken up with a knot in my hair. I  stood in the mirror, when I heard a knock on the door, "Hey kiddo you alright?"  I heard my dad ask. I walked over to the door and opened it and made a motion to my hair. "Wow, I'll go get your mom." He slowly said with a laugh. "No, it's fine.. I'll get out." I walk away before I could get a answere and got in the shower.
            (Time skip)
After three hours of screaming, brushing, and pulling at my hair, I still hadn't gotten it out. Edaline come up a few times to help, but I told her I had it.
I had finally given up, when the idea hit me, WHY DON'T YOU CUT YOUR HAIR!!! Do elves cut their hair?  Well I was about to find out. I ran around my room looking for scissor, and hair bands.  "SO... here we go," I thought, as I sectioned my hair and tied it in to two pigtails. "Let's cut my hair!" As I walked over to my mirror to ask for her help, thoughts were swimming though my head. Would Fitz like it, what about my parents, should I ask Flora for help? But no, I'm committing to this, if Fitz doesn't like it, whatever; my parents love me, and a hair cut won't change that!

 "Please tell me you aren't planning on wearing your hair like that today!" My mirror exclaimed. "No, I have more fashion since than that," I said, though a laugh. " I need you to walk me though cutting my hair." "Your going to cut your own hair?!  Ok I need you to wet it and brush it out!" My mirror answered, with excitement in her voice. "Wait, your not going to argue with me?" I asked. "No you've needed a hair-cut for a long time, plus you'll look so cute with short hair!!!" After wetting and brushing my hair it was time... to cut it. "Maybe I shouldn't do this, maybe I should just"   " NO!! We are doing this! I'm tired of you whining about the knots in your hair. Plus your boyfriend," "We are just friends, we um... broke-up." "What! Never mind let's do this! Know cut exactly were I tell you!"

 Fifteen minutes later, my hair!!

This is what it looks like, but the slight wave would be natural.

" I love it!" I was jumping up in down, "I am so happy! Thank you so much!!!" All of a sudden Sandor coming running in because of my screaming. "Your hair?!"  He said.  I gave small smile and asked,  "You like it?" Flora pocked her head in to see, "Yes!" They answered in unison.

I did it!!!!!! Hope you like!!!!

So I just went back and edited this.. Its sooo bad!!! But, hopefully its better. Im really bad at grammar and writing if you can't tell, but I'm trying to go through and edit! So, wish me luck!! Love you all bye!! God bless! <33

(12-04-2020)