This story was written byBen347. So this story is called forbidden love(a Kion and vitani story) and it's not AS bad as the other ones, but still sucks. Btw I had to block someone because they couldn't handle criticism, ikr so stupid so this story is a kionxvitani story but there are a few issues with the story. Mainly the plot. The plot is all over the place. For example, it was confusing to begin with, the writer didnt make it clear what the settings was for the au, it just expected us to understand. Ziras pride is still in the pridelands, are kion and vitani Cubs or adults. It hurts my brain. But really in this universe, Nala killed zira and now her pride lives in the pridelands, and for a while the story sort of made sense (barely) except for the spelling errors, which hurts. Then there is the random sex scenes, they show up out of nowhere, it's painful, and then the plot is all over the place again. And the fact that I can tell if they are Cubs or not is both confusing and disturbing at the same time. But if you excuse me I'm going to go cry myself to sleep.
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