Hi guys...Wanted to ask u something....
Guys r you enjoying this ff or not.... If it seems boring or uninteresting to u guys please let me know
Where I'm lagging.....
Aur please tell me weather to continue or to quit this story as.... According to no of view is to no of vote ratio it seems a large no of readers are not liking it....😔😔😔
Yaar please help me with ur advise abt my writings style/story plot /weather to continue or not......
Hope u will ans .....
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Happy reading 🤗🤗🤗Preeta: wohakshaymehranahiakshaymalhotrahaiprithvimalhotrakabhai.
Everyone one: preeta kya bol rahi ho kuch samajh nahi aa raha, thoda clear bolo gi....
Preeta :(take a deep breath and)woh akshay mehra nahi akshay malhotra hai prithvi malhotra ka bhai.
Everyone: kyaaa.....
Preeta: yes it's tru and adi aru hum jisse dhund rahe the woh prithvi malhotra and mrs prithvi malhotra I mean Sherlyn prithvi malhotra hai....
Everyone: what???
Karan : mujhe phele hi pata tha woh dadhi wala bakra villain hai par tum sunne walo mei se kaha ho....
Nahi karan prithvi ji aache hai woh bahut aache hai tum hi aaise un par shak karte ho..... *Mimics her*
Wait a minute par yeh tumhe kaise pata ....
Preeta narrated:
Karan mujhe prithvi par molisha ne jab false accusation lagaya tha tab se shak tha , agar woh itne hi aache hai toh tumhare khilaaf maa ko provoke kyu kar rahe thae but mujhe koi sabut nahi mila so maine kuch kaha nahi , but jab meri shaadi hone wali thi jis din luthra house invite karne aayi thi after 3 hrs mai malhotra house gyi and waha maine jo dekha I was shocked to hear that....
Maine prithvi ko Sherlyn ko larte huae dekha....
Prithvi:p
Sherlyn:s
Akshay:A
Flashback******
S: prithvi ek baad yaad rakhna yeh shaadi sirf luthra's Ko barbaad karne ke liye karoge.. .
P: off course baby I know ...
S: u don't know tabhi mujhe yaad dilana padh raha hai ... Yaad rakhna preeta ke saath shaadi ke baad kya karna hai .... U have to imprison her in this house ..... Aur jo pyaar umdh raha hai na iss dil mei uss behen ji ke liye khatam kar do....
Yaad rakhna mai mrs prithvi malhotra hu... Agar tumne kuch bhi kiya ya mujhe dhokha diya toh .....
Prithvi
P: tum mujhe dhamki de rahi ho yaad rakhna mai kon hu.....
A: bhai bhabhi cool down.... Hum aapas mei kyu fight kar rahe hai...
Aur bhabhi trust bhai he loves u and his baby... But abhi aapko luthra house jana cahiye.
Aur bhai mei bhi chalta hu....
Flashback end***
Everyone: shocked
Shristy: di aapko yeh sab
Karan: shaadi se phele pata tha....
Preeta nooded
Karan😠😠😠: tum pagal ho gyi thi preeta uski sach pata hone ke bavjood tum us mandap mei aayi ... R u insane?
Tum samjhti kya ho khud ko agar tumhe kuch.... Kyu?
Adi:haa pari kyu nahi bataya hume?
Aru: aur tu usse shaadi kyu karne wali thi ?
Preeta: mallu aur kritika ke liye....
Everyone: preeeeta😭😭😭
Preeta: koi saboot nahi hai humare paas mallu ko justice dilwane ke liye aur kritika usse shaadi karne wali thi....agar mai prithvi se shaadi kar leti toh uske ghar mei reh kar saboot ikathe karne mei aasani ho jati.....
Kritika:sry😭😭
Preeta: shh chup kar tu mere liye shristy jaisi hai.... Tere liye 100 baar bhi meri jaan kurbaan toh yeh kya hai....
Adi +aru: hum apni ek behen kho chuke hai .....😭😭😭😭aur tu khud humse dur ja rahi thi.... U don't care 4 us.....
Preeta: aisa nahi hai , mai cah kar bhi tum logo se dur nahi ja sakti... Aur kabhi mat kehna I don't care .... Aur agar kuch ho bhi jata I know ki tum dono sambhal lete....
Rishabh: par preeta itna risk
Sammy: di aap mujhe bata sakti thi
Shristy:koi aur rasta dhoondte....
Preeta: guys I'm fyn ..... Aur waise bhi meri shaadi usse nahi hui tum log issue kyu bana rahe ho .... Jinda hu mari nahi hu.....
Everyone was quite ..... As they know ki preeta is highly possessive for her loved ones....
Roo: bhabhi ab aage kya.....
Preeta: plan...😏
Plan was discussed.....
Preeta: ready to rock
Roo: ever ready to shock them....
All laugh....
Rishabh: sabhi thodi der rest kar lo....
Everyone leaves to room....
While karan leave out from villa....
Preeta observed his behavior and goes behind him.....
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Wait for next update....
Precap: mai kyu batau.... Agla chapter padh lena 😝😝😝🤣🤣🤣With lots of love♥️♥️♥️
Desired_moments ♥️♥️♥️♥️To know stay tuned....
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