Luna (earlier titled The Queen's Restraint)

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***UPDATE: The story is being edited and republished, the author has taken down the old version and the story has been retitled "Luna". Which is currently ongoing with regular updates. The description has changed as well.

This chapter has been dedicated to the author and you can subsequently find the story on her profile.

Also, the storyline is the same until now... I don't think that it'll change with subsequent updates either.***

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" An abomination, that was Lilly. A girl who was born in a good family from the most powerful pack. Who could have thought that this girl would be wolf-less? Abandoned and shunned away by her family, maltreated by the pack members, Lilly had no choice but to live her life in constant struggle. However, all these things are about to be drastically change.

 "The path from your neck to your ear is very delicious." Lucas whispered on my ear. "But next time I will kiss the path downwards." "

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In my opinion, the description doesn't do justice to how beautiful the story really is. So drop whatever you are doing and go read it!

*Highest rating is 5

Storyline - (4/5) 💣💣💣💣 (Amazing storyline and plot twists!)

Smut - (1/5) 🍦 (Just a few scenes, with appropriate warnings before it starts)

Writing and Grammar - (3/5)📝📝📝 (

***The story is under editing and the typo-errors, grammar is being corrected, however I will update the review only after the story has been completely reuploaded. Thank you.*** 

Honestly, if you are triggered by typo errors and grammatical mistakes then I would recommend you to wait until the author edits the story and then read it because you can find an error or two on every second-third chapter. 

Though the author is aware of the fact and already said that the story would be edited - since its a first draft - after the completion of the sequel, but if you can conveniently ignore the mistakes then do go ahead and read it as there's no major issues)

Character Descriptions and Development - (5/5) 🦸‍♀️🦸‍♀️🦸‍♀️🦸‍♀️🦸‍♀️ (A full rating, do I really even need to elaborate...)

Alpha obnoxiousness level - (0/5) Not Applicable... (yeah he's that good! Unbelievable, right?)

Overall score: 88%

*yes its mathematically calculated, I love math... I know its hard to believe that someone can love math but the rarity does occur...

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