Here is one the drafts that has a dead end
"I had enough of you Ali!" His voice is almost loud enough to be heard outside "I'm here working my ass of while you do nothing exept play that stupid game!" He said again and the said boy started quietly sobbing not wanting to see what happens next. He saw how Ali reacted to his yelling and knelt down to his level and placed his hand on his shoulder "Ali,please understand. I'm doing this for you. For us. For Cyberaya! You can't keep doing this Ali. Please don't waste my hard work"the boy then started crying this time,louder at what his father said. He's right. He knows his father only wants the best but he can't do it without him. He needs him more than anyone else.
Ali still stayed quiet and gloomy. His father wasn't used to seeing him like this and decided to cheer him up "how about this. Tommorow after I come home, we'll get some icecream?" He said but Ali turned his back from his father not once looking back "don't make promises you can't keep" he said as he went up to his room leaving Ghazali alone.
Ghazali slowly stood up and sighed before going into his office knowing that Ali was right. He can't spend time with him. He was too dedicated to work before, that now,he doesn't even recognize his own son. A tear escaped from the father's eye as he booted up his laptop to finish his work to hopefully get home early.
"Ghazali asked to spend time with you?" A female voice came from the boys computer "yeah,but I knew he couldn't do it" the sad not said to his mentor "well....it just so happens that Dato is giving them a week off" she said again and Ali's head shot up but he was still skeptical "really?" She just nodded before saying "you should go to sleep. You don't want to be late again" and logging off.
Ali sighed and decided to take a cold shower before sleeping. He grabbed his towel and made his way downstairs. He passed by his father's office with the door wide open. Both made eye contact but didn't say a word to each other.
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