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Sanctity is a complete justified title for this story. As in the story you have portrayed how a victim of child sexual abuse loose her sanctity for every relationships due to injustice happen with her.
Ratings: 9/10
Book cover:
It's too plain change it....readers always judge a book by it's cover so, change it.
Description:
Its good...with full details. As I always recommend to atleast keep the description of the story proper as a reader will always read the description before giving a single minute to read your book.
R: 8.5/10
Plot:
your plot is very powerful as its about a girl who was a victim of sexual assault. This plot deserves more spices in it. Its simple....but about a very sensitive topic...the plot twist should also be there then only it could have been an amazing story.
R: 7.5/10
The middle of the story:
The middle part is quite boring and predictable. It just shows the regular time table of Shirley...and the time lapse also is too soon...so, try to improve it.
Ratings: 7/1 0
The ending:
The ending is too normal...I mean try to add something emotional. so,that readers will get satisfaction. Nothing to say much...just do little change and put some surprise for the end.
Ratings: 6.5/10
Messege convey:
well the message you tried to give was good. It actually reached to readers that we should fight for ourselves as our life ends where the fight ends. But we should be more specific about the message to whom you wants to give as we can expect from a child to fight back.
Ratings: 6.5/10
Grammar and Punctuation:
Well the grammatical mistakes are not there too much...still work on it. There are some mistakes....but read it yourself you will figure it out.
Punctuation gives meaning to the lines. There are many punctuation you put it in wrong place so, correct it as I already explained to you what to put where...in your previous review book.
Ratings: 8/10
The matters in which your story is lacking behind:
° Prologue is absent ° Epilogue is absent.
° if you want to put it in a form of diary entry...use diary entry formate...to write those....
Overall review:
Well you have potentiality but before writing your books try to read the books of the genre in which you are going to write your story...I gives you idea. Your idea is good but it lacks information like how the parents allowed her to study more or how she managed to survive with her cousin....so, try to add those information.
Overall ratings: 5.8/10
As a reader I will recommend this books to readers who likes to read books based on female lead.
As a reader I will recommend this books to readers who likes to read books based on female lead.
I hope you like my review and work on the points I pointed out. I have covered every part you asked for.
I hope you prosper in your life and again all the best for your future Psr1403
According to me it could have been an amazing diary entry story...but still its good.
