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Title: Beautiful. Though it may appear too long for a title, it really does justice to the plot. (10/10)
Cover: Simple and gorgeous. (10/10)
Description: The way the characters' emotions and the scenario have been put up is very good. Especially, the poems at the end of each chapter is commendable. (8/10)
Prologue: Interesting. It intrigues a sense of suspense and interest in the reader. (9/10)
Plot: It is a sweet teen fiction. Two young people trying to heal each other, knowingly or unknowingly. (9/10)
Character Development: The protagonists have been portrayed beautifully. Their conversation, gestures are very sweet and natural as per their characteristics. However, the supporting characters must be given a more importance. (7/10)
Story Telling: The pace of the story, perhaps, is a bit too slow for its own good. A little push is the pace migjt be beneficial. The story has barely started off though. (8/10)
Language and Grammar: Very minor grammatical mistakes, especially in tense which will gradually improve with time. Language used is simple and easy to understand. Punctuation is perfect. (9/10)
CONS: >Less importance to supporting characters. >Minor tense errors. >A bit too slow.
To the author,
I strongly feel you can be a much better writer than you are today. Open yourself up to new books. You have a good grip in the language. However, some time has to be spent in grammar and tense. I really loved yours story. Lastly, try to improvise the prologue if you can. Make it a bit different than the blurb.Love and best wishes. Stay safe.
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I would like to recommend this book to everyone, especially to the readers who love ready teen fiction. Its a beautiful story about two beautiful young minds.
